We can say, humans have made tremendous improvement in the quality of leaving compared to few generations before. This was mainly the result of the technological advancements that we achieved in various fields of science.
The technological advancement has helped in reducing poverty. The invention of high yielding crops which helped reducing the cost and increased quantity of food items produced. That has helped us in having great health compared to our previous generation. So compared to previous generation cases of malnutrition and associated deaths has decreased. This has also resulted in reduced conflicts between people for land and other necessities.
In addition to that, advancement in medical field has helped us in curing diseases. The disease that was deathly can now be avoided by using vaccine. For example, polio virus has taken many lives few generation before and has made many people with disabilities including my grandfather. It is the invention of polio virus saved us. In addition to this the techniques like MRI, ultrasound which helps in accurate diagnosis which helped us in giving proper treatment to the diseases. This has helped us in living a healthy life and increased our life expectancy compared to our ancestors.
Furthermore, the technology has helped us made our daily activities easier. For example, the invention of cars and other vehicles help in travelling far distance with less time. That has helped us going far away places for jobs and other needs. The invention of internet help us to connect to people at far away places and the online courses helped us in getting quality education at no price.
However, life has became complex in some aspects of life. For example, world has became very competitive especially in the job market that has made us to acquire new skills which reduced our time to spend on our passion. The jobs also became harder which took a lot of time of our lives and which resulted in losing some of our friends. But compared to our ancestors life these drawbacks very negligible.
In short, we can say that technology has helped us in achieving better quality of life compared to our ancestors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...ment in the quality of leaving compared to few generations before. This was mainly...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to reduce' or 'reduce'.
Suggestion: to reduce; reduce
...ion of high yielding crops which helped reducing the cost and increased quantity of food...
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Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun generation seems to be countable; consider using: 'few generations'.
Suggestion: few generations
...ample, polio virus has taken many lives few generation before and has made many people with di...
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Line 7, column 198, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to go' or 'go'.
Suggestion: to go; go
...ance with less time. That has helped us going far away places for jobs and other need...
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Line 9, column 19, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...tion at no price. However, life has became complex in some aspects of life. For ex...
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Line 9, column 82, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...aspects of life. For example, world has became very competitive especially in the job ...
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Line 9, column 372, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ends. But compared to our ancestors life these drawbacks very negligible. In ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in short']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.253846153846 0.229887763892 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.192307692308 0.158761421928 121% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0717948717949 0.0866891130778 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0461538461538 0.046263068375 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0666666666667 0.0685040099705 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128205128205 0.118717715034 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0897435897436 0.0351676179071 255% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.74180184602 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0333333333333 0.0309702414327 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0717948717949 0.0887237588012 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00769230769231 0.0209618222197 37% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0230769230769 0.0139019557991 166% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2187.0 2387.08602151 92% => OK
No of words: 359.0 408.028673835 88% => OK
Chars per words: 6.09192200557 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.381615598886 0.338922669872 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.272980501393 0.251872472559 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.214484679666 0.174417080927 123% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130919220056 0.112833075102 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74180184602 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490250696379 0.524397521467 93% => OK
Word variations: 51.4428667124 59.2087087015 87% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.3181818182 20.5533526081 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7953489504 48.84282405 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4090909091 120.699889404 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3181818182 20.5533526081 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.409090909091 0.644075263715 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 43.6162319575 45.7405998639 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.54621848739 1.45489161554 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117388324056 0.300154397459 39% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.131852266952 0.103427244359 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0880680626982 0.0752933317313 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.531731860935 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.16816365238 0.151897553556 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532091462133 0.114077575197 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0207681375592 0.0781384742642 27% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.346901605802 0.336927656856 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.079202353573 0.067059652881 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773785021994 0.210909579961 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261815174786 0.0618886996521 42% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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