Humans always is in need of one another, so they make relationships between people. People who are in a friendly relationships always share their thoughts and express their opinions. We can say that telling the true opinions is important to maintain a healthy relations. But , that may not be the case always as telling truth without any considerations can adversely affect the relationships, especially if you are pointing out mistakes.
Truth must be said considering the place and time, especially if you are pointing out mistakes. Friends usually don't get offended from getting criticisms of one other but that may not be always the case. For example, criticizing your friend in front others may send a wrong message to him. He may think you do not appreciate him that is the why you insulted him in public. That may result in you losing the friendship. I can recall a friend who used to be highly critical of others works and says the blunt truth without thinking there are others also listening. So people got annoyed of him and started avoiding him. His critical behavior made him less approachable as result he made only very few friends. So, we must be careful when criticizing your friends in front of others.
In addition to that, time is also factor should be considered when pointing out mistakes. For example, when your friend is about make submission of work before deadline and ask your help to review it then you mustn't go on criticizing it. There are situation where they are actually expecting some help so criticism may considered as a hindrance to their work. They think you are criticizing because you don't want to help him or do anything with his work which cause you their friendships. So we must carefully analyse situation and offer criticism or help depending upon your friends need.
But there are situations when absolute truth are required. For example when you friend is follows a charlatan blindly, in that case you must confront him with truth before bad things happens to him. You must do it a soft manner that he will listen to you and if he doesn't listens to you must find people whom he may listens and save him from danger. He may be get angry at first but time heals all wounds. So don't bother correcting you friends when it calls for extreme cases.
In short we can see that truth is not always welcomes, So we should avoid telling truth without considering time and place. But, sometimes telling truth shouldn't avoided even if how hurtful it may sound as time passes he will understands.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 8, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is always
Humans always is in need of one another, so they make re...
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Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'relationship'?
Suggestion: relationship
...en people. People who are in a friendly relationships always share their thoughts and express...
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Line 1, column 261, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'relation'?
Suggestion: relation
...ions is important to maintain a healthy relations. But , that may not be the case always ...
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Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ant to maintain a healthy relations. But , that may not be the case always as tell...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... pointing out mistakes. Friends usually dont get offended from getting criticisms of...
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Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'why'?
Suggestion: why
...think you do not appreciate him that is the why you insulted him in public. That may re...
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Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'factored'.
Suggestion: factored
...s. In addition to that, time is also factor should be considered when pointing out ...
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f work before deadline and ask your help to review it then you mustnt go on criti...
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Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: mustn't
...nd ask your help to review it then you mustnt go on criticizing it. There are situati...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'situations'?
Suggestion: situations
... mustnt go on criticizing it. There are situation where they are actually expecting some ...
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Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...y think you are criticizing because you dont want to help him or do anything with hi...
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Line 5, column 558, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to depend' or 'depend'.
Suggestion: to depend; depend
...e situation and offer criticism or help depending upon your friends need. But there ar...
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Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...er that he will listen to you and if he doesnt listens to you must find people whom he...
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Line 7, column 410, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... at first but time heals all wounds. So dont bother correcting you friends when it c...
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Line 7, column 437, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'friend'
Suggestion: friend
...l wounds. So dont bother correcting you friends when it calls for extreme cases. In ...
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Line 9, column 154, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...and place. But, sometimes telling truth shouldnt avoided even if how hurtful it may soun...
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Line 9, column 227, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'understand'
Suggestion: understand
...ful it may sound as time passes he will understands.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in short']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.182389937107 0.229887763892 79% => OK
Verbs: 0.215932914046 0.158761421928 136% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0440251572327 0.0866891130778 51% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0649895178197 0.046263068375 140% => OK
Pronouns: 0.119496855346 0.0685040099705 174% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0964360587002 0.118717715034 81% => OK
Participles: 0.0545073375262 0.0351676179071 155% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57226287764 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.020964360587 0.0309702414327 68% => OK
Particles: 0.0062893081761 0.00188951952338 333% => OK
Determiners: 0.0503144654088 0.0887237588012 57% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0482180293501 0.0209618222197 230% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0314465408805 0.0139019557991 226% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2538.0 2387.08602151 106% => OK
No of words: 442.0 408.028673835 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74208144796 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.319004524887 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.235294117647 0.251872472559 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.156108597285 0.174417080927 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0972850678733 0.112833075102 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57226287764 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481900452489 0.524397521467 92% => OK
Word variations: 53.8144510134 59.2087087015 91% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.68 20.5533526081 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5090510474 48.84282405 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.52 120.699889404 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.68 20.5533526081 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.44 0.644075263715 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.54480286738 307% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.2094117647 45.7405998639 90% => OK
Elegance: 0.832460732984 1.45489161554 57% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2528037021 0.300154397459 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118153761191 0.103427244359 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0993300379346 0.0752933317313 132% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.440763411318 0.497263757937 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.121109883981 0.151897553556 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857043191844 0.114077575197 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535429743523 0.0781384742642 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.280922534692 0.336927656856 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0621186540436 0.067059652881 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163689314485 0.210909579961 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569405998701 0.0618886996521 92% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.86379928315 311% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 12.0 2.4623655914 487% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 13.6433691756 176% => OK
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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