Scandals may be political, social, financial, religious offenses which disrespect morality and brings dispute in the community. scandals are useful because it focus over attention on immorality activities or sinful activity and bring changes in the attitude of people and government. Most of the people get involved in the sinful veracity for frame and money. Many alleged scandals are there which are yet not prove for example 2G spectrum, RAFALE because of such alleged scandals the dispute take place in community and due to this people sabotage the public properties.
If scandals has take place the tidings of that should known to every citizen, in the case the reformers and speakers play and very important role to ubiquitous the information all over citizen, because the ramification of the scandals is to regret by the populace of the nation. For example, if financial scandal happen, in this the case the money which is extravagant should know to every citizen because the government get the revenue through public.
Scandals faced to much focus because its impact is on people life, when scandals happen at that time colossal amount of money get disappeared and it directly affect on individual quotidian needs and as well as government. The money which get to government is through citizen most prominently in term of taxes, and every citizen has a right to know how government is using public revenue because if too immense amount of money is getting recede at that time public has to regret.
In conclusion, therefor the scandals are useful and they focused the attention on problem, as well as the reformers and speaker also play and prominent role in this case to bring such activity out of box and alleged scandal should not come out without proof because the dispute will not takeplace in society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Scandals
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 19.5258426966 5% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 12.4196629213 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 14.8657303371 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.3162921348 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 33.0505617978 6% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 58.6224719101 0% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 12.9106741573 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 53.0 2235.4752809 2% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 9.0 442.535393258 2% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88888888889 5.05705443957 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 1.73205080757 4.55969084622 38% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 2.72618758809 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 9.0 215.323595506 4% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 1.0 0.4932671777 203% => OK
syllable_count: 14.4 704.065955056 2% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 20.2370786517 10% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 4.0 23.0359550562 17% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 15.0 60.3974514979 25% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 26.5 118.986275619 22% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 4.5 23.4991977007 19% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.21951772744 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189722881362 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133877136403 0.0831039109588 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133877136403 0.0758088955206 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189722881362 0.150359130593 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 14.1392134831 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 48.8420337079 138% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.9 12.1743820225 40% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 2.0 100.480337079 2% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 1.0 11.8971910112 8% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 3.6 11.2143820225 32% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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