Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Scandals may be political, social, financial, religious offenses which disrespect morality and brings dispute in the community. scandals are useful because it focus over attention on immorality activities or sinful activity and bring changes in the attitude of people and government. Most of the people get involved in the sinful veracity for frame and money. Many alleged scandals are there which are yet not prove for example 2G spectrum, RAFALE because of such alleged scandals the dispute take place in community and due to this people sabotage the public properties.
If scandals has take place the tidings of that should known to every citizen, in the case the reformers and speakers play and very important role to ubiquitous the information all over citizen, because the ramification of the scandals is to regret by the populace of the nation. For example, if financial scandal happen, in this the case the money which is extravagant should know to every citizen because the government get the revenue through public.
Scandals faced to much focus because its impact is on people life, when scandals happen at that time colossal amount of money get disappeared and it directly affect on individual quotidian needs and as well as government. The money which get to government is through citizen most prominently in term of taxes, and every citizen has a right to know how government is using public revenue because if too immense amount of money is getting recede at that time public has to regret.
In conclusion, therefor the scandals are useful and they focused the attention on problem, as well as the reformers and speaker also play and prominent role in this case to bring such activity out of box and alleged scandal should not come out without proof because the dispute will not takeplace in society.
- Scandals may be political, social, financial, religious offenses which disrespect morality and brings dispute in the community. scandals are useful because it focus over attention on immorality activities or sinful activity and bring changes in the attitu 100
- "In any profession-business, politics, education, government-those in power should step down after five years. The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership. 50
- The nation should required all of its student to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 50
- Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be 40
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Scandals
...ty and brings dispute in the community. scandals are useful because it focus over attent...
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Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'focuses', 'focusses'?
Suggestion: focuses; focusses
...mmunity. scandals are useful because it focus over attention on immorality activities...
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Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have known' or 'know'?
Suggestion: have known; know
...s take place the tidings of that should known to every citizen, in the case the refor...
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Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... populace of the nation. For example, if financial scandal happen, in this the ca...
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Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...venue through public. Scandals faced to much focus because its impact is on peo...
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Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
...f money get disappeared and it directly affect on individual quotidian needs and as we...
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Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...f money get disappeared and it directly affect on individual quotidian needs and as well ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e at that time public has to regret. In conclusion, therefor the scandals are...
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Suggestion:
...ispute will not takeplace in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 302.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06291390728 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58305525803 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483443708609 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.7878067201 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.888888889 118.986275619 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5555555556 23.4991977007 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 5.21951772744 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 10.2758426966 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183228375451 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847836448219 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04128811586 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123177546547 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307318316192 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 14.1392134831 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 48.8420337079 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.