Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
A scandal is defined as a moral or a legal act that results in public outrage. The author prompts that scandals are very important to highlight topics that need our immediate attention better than any other speaker or reformer. I agree with this statement as scandals are really important to bring wrong doings of various authorities and people into public notice, but at the same time can vitiate our judgement by being biased for a particular side.
Scandals are very important to shed light on topics that are important and needs to be immediately addressed. Scandals can make people aware about the wrong doings of certain organizations that are concerned with public interest and are harmful for the public. For example, recently, the Facebook-Cambridge Analytica Scandal was a very big issue, where Facebook were accused of selling personal information of their users to Cambridge Analytica to support election campaigns in USA. This scandal caused huge public out-roar as it was a direct transgression of human rights and their privacy. Thus, due to the revelation of this scandal, the public became aware about the breach of their privacy and also helped concerned authorities to tighten norms that needs to be followed by organizations like Facebook.
Moreover, scandals also bring forward the problem of corruption in the government and other organizations. For instance, in 2010, India hosted the Common Wealth Games, the organization committee that was appointed by the government was charged with venality, and were accused of swindling over 100 million rupees. The scandal helped to bring attention to the wrong doings of the committee and thus, helped the law to catch the wrong-doers.
However, scandals do not always bring forward the true situation. Scandals are often one-sided and can conceal the truth. People use scandals to defame other as seen in the Show Business. In other words, they are just rumors that are spread to hinder someone's public reputation. Also, scandals are sometimes useless and are just gossips that do not require any public attention.
In conclusion, scandals are really important to bring forward issues that require immediate public attention. But not all scandals are right, and are sometimes used in a wrong way to corrupt public opinion about someone. Therefore, scandals, if used in a proper way, can be a really effective technique to spread information to the public.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2040.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 390.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77368587503 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497435897436 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3428395598 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.368421053 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5263157895 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 5.13820224719 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126640610542 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463360904777 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0227637742959 0.0758088955206 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811690985938 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219771025486 0.0667264976115 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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