Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
I believe that science and technology is our answer to current day problems. The advancement made in the field has made problems of last century irrelevant. contributions have been made to various fields like healthcare, digital technology, mobility, food processing, agricultural produce,etc.
Personally, I believe transcedental progress has been made in healthcare. For example, in the chicken-pox epidemic in early 20th century, more than 20 million indian's lost their lives. this is in contrast to present day situation where chicken-pox is eradicated from indian Landscape. The precision achieved by the medical equipments have facilitated complex surgeries in the most delicate organs. Robotic surgeries have also contributed significantly in conducting flawless operations.
Another sector benefitting from rapid advances in science is mobility. Just imagine how long it would take 50 years ago to travel from Europe to America. The ballpark figure is around 140 days. The advent of aerial communication has reduced this time by 139 days, that is a 14000% improvement! .
The problem of communicating long distances has been effaced by rise of digital communication. it takes seconds to transmit information around the globe, irrespective of distance. The global hub of high-speed communication has added a dimension of accessibility along with availability. Resource sharing and global synchronization on cutting edge technologies have helped people learn, grow and live a better life.
some posit that the burgeoning technology has led to more complications. while this may be partially acceptable, the positves outweigh them overwhelmingly. it is also important to note that the cause of these complication's are often linked with improper or excessive use of technology rather than technology itself.
The contributions made by technology in enhancing human standard of living is magnanimous. while some restraint is advised in the scale of it's use, it's growth is the key to our problem's.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, while, for example, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 301.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7342192691 5.05705443957 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32166741397 2.79657885939 119% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647840531561 0.4932671777 131% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2530054788 60.3974514979 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.1904761905 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 23.4991977007 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7619047619 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0446235681333 0.243740707755 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0115062994582 0.0831039109588 14% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0155362327885 0.0758088955206 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0223545014048 0.150359130593 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135587051553 0.0667264976115 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.36 12.1639044944 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.38706741573 117% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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