Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
Problems in the society can be reffered in many ways like social, cultural, ecnomical, political. As said " every problem has a solution" but need not always be from single way or aspect. Solution to each problem differs. Likeways growing science and new innovations in technology cannt be able to solve al problem persisiting in the society.With this i can mostly disagree with the authors statement that one day problems in the society can be able to be sloved with science and technology.
Considering certain major issues prevaling in society- Indian scenario, Malnutrition among children and low productivity and profits to farmers, growing death rate among peasants can be mitigated only when loopholes in agriculture are restrained and introduction of scientific research and technological aids like biofortification, national marketing and minimal support prices can be properly implemented by related officals and authorities with coloboration with advanced made in technologies.
But, when it comes to peace and harmony in the society which is now a debatable issue ongoing, cannt be sloved with any innovation and highly advanced technologies however, it can only be obtained only when people cultivate the habbit to have possitivity in thoughs and morality in actions. It should be within the individual and society, inculcated in family.
However for instance, india- A sub continent, can be able to contain the situations under any circumstances only because of the culture and tradtions, their beliefs and commitments made in the society. This can be supported by giving an example of how people belonging to various caste and religions propagate oneless and being united under situations of national security and conflicts.
To sum up, only problems those can be scritinised, planned with a consequential protocol, objectivecan be sloved obtaining a solution from science and technologies. nevertheless, those and subjective and need a high thought process and change in society cannt be solved with mere technologies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, so, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 314.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53184713376 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17860082186 2.79657885939 114% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595541401274 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.252209519 60.3974514979 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.909090909 118.986275619 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5454545455 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322009357693 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129542974437 0.0831039109588 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100439805438 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178496718557 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120270812064 0.0667264976115 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 14.1392134831 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 48.8420337079 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.51 8.38706741573 125% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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