Scientists and other researchers should focus their research on areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
investigation is one of the pivotal factors in science. scientists inquire variety subjects for their studies. there are a lot of different areas that scientists and researcher can focus on them. one question will be rise is: whether scientists should consider the areas that contain benefit for the vast number of people or it does not matter for what size of population they research? some people believe that the areas which are lucrative for huge number of people is more essential for scientists and researchers, while other disagree. From my vantage point, I strongly approve to the statement that the focal point of scientists should regard the majority of the population.
one compelling reason lending credence to the stand taken above is that it is economical for the government. government should control the budget and it might be wasteful to put their effort for other field which is not necessarily. For example, in the several past decades, when we retrospective, some countries concentrate on the space and some issues that is related to them such as Russia and United State. these projects are extremely exorbitant for the government. these subjects have no advantages for the most of the populations, thus, the government allocated a tremendous budget for researching in this areas which is not beneficial for the people. If the governments put these exceedingly budget for ameliorate poverty or to eradicate some kind of disease, there are no poverty in the word and the percent of people who dies due to the disease will be saved. As a result the more intact people, the more person to work. working lots of people in the factories and companies will turn the wheel of economic.
In addition, research in the field that compromise large number of people would help countries to develop. development is one of the clues that most of first word contain. investigation in the various fields which include most of people would assist government to thrive particularly in the industries. To illustrate the view, I point out to the several universities that they accentuated on the robotic field. The scientists worked on the divergent approach to create a useful robots for human which is enhanced the quality of the worked and there be less time consuming.
Admittedly, researching in other field will horizon the scientists view and it will be providing an opportunities to innovation and find something novel that might be important for humans. For instance, searching about polio at first glance it might seem trifling because this disease just infected a small part of the societies. However, by disintegrated this disease in the world, the scientists found out new things about vaccinations and this is the full-fledged achievement in the science which is gives another point of view for other crucial diseases.
All in all, from my perspective, scientists should pay attentions to the areas which are related to the most of people. this is not only economic but also helped countries to develop. Of course, addressing to the areas that contain low popularities has their own benefit; nevertheless, it is better to choose something for wide range of people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, of course, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2672.0 2235.4752809 120% => OK
No of words: 523.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10898661568 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78217453174 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85613706723 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48948374761 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 819.0 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5945733581 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.88 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.92 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185452973918 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567408086891 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566238179579 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120758073843 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501203759604 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 100.480337079 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.