Scientists and other researchers should focus their research on areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people.
I do not agree with this topic totally. I think scientists and other researchers should focus on areas that need for ours even if they are just benefit a small number of people.
In the area of medical science, a majority of scientists are concentrate on a specific malidy which may infect a few people or maybe no one infected by it now. however, everyone of us could not assure one mircobiome have not been reported to relate to any disease today could not cause an erupt in human such as H7N9 virus. it is too late to conduct a research to a pathogen when it has pervealled in people and has caused death in many people.
In the astronomy area, secientists focus on an unknown plant, which may not benefit the greatest number of people. But it is pretty important for a nation to be a powerful country. Take the research of moon for an example, every country in the wrold wants to climb the moon first, which will improve the reputation of their country in the wrold.
As for researchers who focus on history, which is different from those scientists who explore something about the future, they research things had happened hureands and throards years ago. You may think those things were useless to us and can not benefit the greatest number of people, however, researching on history is also essential to us and can tell us where we came and what we derivateed from.
In sum, every area has its own function to human. we could not justfy them with the only number of people who benefited by them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
... for ours even if they are just benefit a small number of people. In the area of medical scien...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...ple or maybe no one infected by it now. however, everyone of us could not assure one mi...
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Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...te to any disease today could not cause an erupt in human such as H7N9 virus. it is too ...
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Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...e an erupt in human such as H7N9 virus. it is too late to conduct a research to a ...
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Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...s H7N9 virus. it is too late to conduct a research to a pathogen when it has pervealled in...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...ery area has its own function to human. we could not justfy them with the only num...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, as for, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 272.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56985294118 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43138706461 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577205882353 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 704.065955056 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.807462824 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.583333333 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386725293999 0.243740707755 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123664806724 0.0831039109588 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131641399765 0.0758088955206 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2048622851 0.150359130593 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108312209493 0.0667264976115 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.