Cooperation is an important characteristic of a strong civil society. In order for government, industry, and other institutional leaders to flourish, there needs to be an overarching sense of cooperation amidst disparate interests. With respect to competition, this is, in my view, an almost inevitable feature of society. This is why I agree with the statement that cooperation, not competition, should be instilled in the young people in any society. Here I will explain three reasons why cooperation should take precedence over competition.
Considering my aformentioned claim that competition is an innate facet of society, I mean this particularly due to the fact that we live in a capitalist country and a world wherein capitalist country's are considered some of the most crucial entities in global affairs. With this said, implicit to a capitalistic society is competition -- be it for consumers, market share, sought after occupations, or educational opportunities. Therefore, it is not necessary to instill a sense of competition into young people, because they will be predisposed to compeition by merely living in current society. Instead, it is important to consider how competition makes for conflicting interests. These conflicting interests occur amongst various permutations of industry actors, government leaders, academic researchers, and so on. A practical response to this is to instill cooperation in young people, as to prepare them to efficiently navigate conflict in years to come.
It is commonly argues that innovation is driven by competition. While innovation is important to society, it does not mean that it is exclusive to a competitive society. Beyond my previously stated argument that competition is implicit to the world we live in, it is important to think about how cooperation is not antithetical to innovation. For example, if an industry has the best interest of the consumers in mind, then they would want to produce a product that can most accurately suit their needs. There is always a drive to make a produce less expensive to produce and more efficient, because, in return, the produce can become more accessible to individuals in various parts of the global market. The important factor of today's innovative market is how it is expanding on a global scale. Thus, with competition aside, the market can be driven merely by the sheer number of consumers that need various products.
Finally, an important aspect of cooperation in society is that is has secondary consequences. For example, a country that has a tendency to cooperate amongst its own leaders may be able to promote cooperation on a global scale. This can result in better international affairs when it comes to, for example, creating trade deals that can help alleviate poverty in a developing nation. Addtionally, this can promote peaceful relations, and less violence overall.
The impact of cooperation has effects beyond just a country's people. This is why it is integral for a country to emphasize cooperation, rather than competition.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, may, second, so, still, then, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, i mean, in my view, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 12.9106741573 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2578.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 483.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33747412008 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20263929219 2.79657885939 115% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503105590062 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 828.9 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1031155147 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.416666667 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177481429121 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511411916402 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474920343097 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944998993763 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346085998871 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 100.480337079 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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