From the primitive times to the present, many species have gone extinct due to several reasons. Whatever might have caused the change in the number of species that are extinct, there has been human intervention in many cases which indeed endangered the species. However, saving endangered species in an exigent step to be taken for ecological balance while, it doesn’t matter who engendered the extinction. The extinction of species affects humans and the natural balance, if necessary steps are not taken to prevent their extinction.
Firstly, one of the main reasons for such massive increase in the extinction of species is the climatic change that was caused by global warming, deforestation and urbanization. With the burgeon of mankind there has been a tremendous effect on the animals that live in the forests or on the islands. If these animals are not rescued before the situation becomes worse, it would create an imbalance in the nature and affect other animals in the system. For example, in India, white tiger population have decreased to hundred as these animals are been haunted for their skin which is used for different purpose. As a result, the natural chain of these tigers and the animals associated with it would be affected.
Additionally, in some cases the real reason for the extinction of a species might remain a mystery. One might not be able to identify why the population of certain species is dwindling. During these situations, is it correct to sit back and try to figure out whether human intervention is the reason? It is better to take a forward step and rescue the animal from extinction as it is more important to preserve them rather than debating on the cause. Government should indeed initiate programs to save endangered species and ban the use of animal skin for human purpose. One more way to save the endangered species is to prohibit haunting in their territories.
However, millions of years ago, while there was no human intervention, many animals have gone extinct. There were evidences of many animals that lived 60 million years ago and went extinct even before human encroachment. How would one help in such a situation? As these animals have gone extinct way before, scientists have tried to study these animals and possible ways to recreate their DNA. This method however has not helped. One such animal is Dinosaur which lived approximately 65 million years ago and the reason for their extinction is alleged as climatic change, diseases and many more factors. Humans may not bring back these animals to live but, they can instead save the animals that are currently becoming extinct.
In conclusion, as explained above, the society should come forward to rescue the endangered species without the regard of what caused the extinction or decline. This is the only way to protect the animals in our contemporary world to dodge the later disadvantages faced by humans and other animals in our ecosystem
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...g, deforestation and urbanization. With the burgeon of mankind there has been a tremendous ...
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Line 3, column 517, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...hite tiger population have decreased to hundred as these animals are been haunted for t...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'in many cases', 'in some cases']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21828358209 0.240241500013 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.175373134328 0.157235817809 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0951492537313 0.0880659088768 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0485074626866 0.0497285424764 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0279850746269 0.0444667217837 63% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113805970149 0.12292977631 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0522388059701 0.0406280797675 129% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63959839271 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.035447761194 0.030933414821 115% => OK
Particles: 0.00373134328358 0.0016655270985 224% => OK
Determiners: 0.10447761194 0.0997080785238 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0186567164179 0.0249443105267 75% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0242537313433 0.0148568991511 163% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2968.0 2732.02544248 109% => OK
No of words: 492.0 452.878318584 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.0325203252 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.58838876751 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.380081300813 0.366273622748 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.294715447154 0.280924506359 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.170731707317 0.200843997647 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.099593495935 0.132149295362 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63959839271 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 219.290929204 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469512195122 0.48968727796 96% => OK
Word variations: 53.8573143971 55.4138127331 97% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6194690265 116% => OK
Sentence length: 20.5 23.380412469 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8905099209 59.4972553346 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.666666667 141.124799967 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 23.380412469 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.541666666667 0.674092028746 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 49.9715447154 51.4728631049 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.52592592593 1.64882698954 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.478614836183 0.391690518653 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.113077757092 0.123202303941 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0889007375669 0.077325440228 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.53308189684 0.547984918172 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.149712170988 0.149214159877 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193037033248 0.161403998019 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106826408246 0.0892212321368 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.354594968421 0.385218514788 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.113751104312 0.0692045440612 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.351483720106 0.275328986314 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107042311362 0.0653680567796 164% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88274336283 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.5995575221 162% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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