Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Choosing field to pursue education has always been a controversial issue due to increase possibility to find appropriate job. While some believe pupils should choose their deciplines according to their desire and talents, others maintain that finding job in the future life and possibilie occupations should be the first proiority. I strongly reckon the most important parameter in selecting field in interst and talent which I will explain my idea.
Considering interest and desire for choosing field provides a situation for students to pursue their favorite major and since they would love that it helps them to work harder and would not be tierd. Even in pleasure time, they prefer to study about their filed and in fact there is not any difference between study time and pleasure time. This process help them to be the best or prominent in thier field whild if they follow a field thet think it has better opportunity for find ing job they might not enjoy the field and feel exhuasting. Even in the future, they fing appropriate job they would not please their work.
Another parameter that should be consider is that if students follow their interest, they would be expert in their field as I mentioned in the pervious paragraph. Thus, they could find job in their field even the number of job opportunities were not enough and companies prefer to employ an employee who are enjoy his work and has enough skills instead of a person that does not have enough sopghisticated. The salary of these persons would be hugly different since they have some skills that may not find another person in that field who has.
However, there might be some exceptions in this issue. Imagine a person who lives in a punery family and should have pay expenses of his family, in this situation following interest and talent would not be a good idea. This person may sacrifize his life for his family and prefer to pursue a field that achieve a job sooner without considering his desire which looks reasonable. This person would accept the situation and would work in the job that may not enjoy to provide a situation for other member of their family to follow their favorite majors.
In conclusion, although I think pursuing interest and talent would have several benefits such as enjoing thier works and lives, nevertheless, I do understand that it is not possible for all of the people like ones who live in penury society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
Choosing field to pursue education has always been a c...
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Line 2, column 46, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...dering interest and desire for choosing field provides a situation for students to pu...
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Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'considered'?
Suggestion: considered
...work. Another parameter that should be consider is that if students follow their intere...
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Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... companies prefer to employ an employee who are enjoy his work and has enough skills in...
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Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enjoyed'.
Suggestion: enjoyed
...es prefer to employ an employee who are enjoy his work and has enough skills instead ...
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Line 4, column 457, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy providing'.
Suggestion: enjoy providing
... and would work in the job that may not enjoy to provide a situation for other member of their f...
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... understand that it is not possible for all of the people like ones who live in penury soc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, thus, while, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2003.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 414.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83816425121 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4863943995 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463768115942 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 615.6 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0510006308 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.533333333 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.21951772744 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293167441985 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108311495684 0.0831039109588 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643695425082 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168084870386 0.150359130593 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787651568722 0.0667264976115 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.