Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
I have an inclination towards the first view among the two given views. I mostly agree that corporations do carry the responsibility of promoting the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate in.
Corporations can mean the private organizations as well as the public or government organizations. They can range from being municipal corporations to huge manufacturing factories. Therefore, when any corporation is set up in a particular society or environment, it surely must abide by the laws, as well as ensure that the residents of that area are not affected or harmed by the acivities they carry out in any way. Let’s say there is a chemical industry that is planning to set up its factory in a particular area. Consequentially, the natives tend to get apprehensive about the idea and would oppose the establishment of such a corporation in the place they reside in, because any factory is bound to produce and release a lot of waste and toxic substances into the environment, which will slowly, but surely start affecting the lives in that area. But if the factory promises of making sure to release waste in a benign manner and assure to not affect the well-being of the residents in any manner, and make sure to abide by the promise, they will be most welcome into the area. It’ll prove to be a win-win situation; the corporation gets to set up their factory in the place they decided, and the residents get to enjoy the fame of having a huge factory in their community without being affected negatively by the same.
Similarly, if a municipal corporation is being set up in a particular society, its sole responsibility would be to promote the well-being of the people living there as well as the environment. It becomes their responsibility to promote awareness about the needs to keep the environment clean, to dispose waste in a proper manner and to maintain discipline in the colonies and streets of the society. They could conduct campaigns, rallies and movements for the same. If they get money-minded about this, it removes the purpose of having a municipal corporation in the first place. Caring only about making money while abiding by the laws does not mean that the corporation is doing a good job. Being only money minded indirectly implies that the corporates can go to any extent, nonchalant about the society, and make use of pernicious means to get their work done and earn money. This turns out to be virulent for the society. This holds true in case of any operating corporation. But this doesn’t mean that the corporations take up the entire responsibility to promote the well-being of societies and environments in which they operate. The denizens also play a part in maintaining the welfare of their own society. The corporations alone should not be held culprit in case things get out of hand.
In conclusion, a joint effort and shared responsibility by both, the residents of a particular community as well as the corporations, can help maintain the well-being of the society as well as the environment surrounding them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 914, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a benign manner" with adverb for "benign"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...romises of making sure to release waste in a benign manner and assure to not affect the well-being...
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Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper manner" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...the environment clean, to dispose waste in a proper manner and to maintain discipline in the colon...
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Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...the residents of a particular community as well as the corporations, can help maintain the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2565.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 522.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91379310345 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77988695657 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03290346011 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44061302682 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 833.4 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.9207855929 60.3974514979 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.142857143 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04761904762 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364335292046 0.243740707755 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120998750723 0.0831039109588 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10416582655 0.0758088955206 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251788425129 0.150359130593 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832824163193 0.0667264976115 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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