This topic raises the controversial issue of whether it is the duty of corporation to promote the well-being of societies and environment in which they operate or the responsibility of corporation is just to collect as much money as possible. Indisputably, it the duty of corporation to collect the sufficient money from the government for the welfare of the people in the society. Nevertheless, the corporation has also a vital role to promote the well-being of the society in they they live. Thus, I would like to argue that the responsibility of corporation is not just to collect the enough money from the government but also is to contribute and help to promote the life of its residents.
Firstly, the goal of the corporation is to promote the well-being of the people. it is the member of the corporation who are given the responsibility to serve for the easiness of the people. For example, if in any society, there is a problem with drinking water, then, the member of the corporation should consult this problem with the head of the society, and then, they should have to find out the solution of the problem and make the people fulfill their needs. If the members of the corporations do not do any thing rather then collecting money, then, who would be their to solve the problems that arises in the society.
Secondly, the corporations there in the society comprises the members of that society so that they can do well for their society. they will collect the fund from the government and utilize that money in developing their society. If there is a problem with transportation or there is not good school in their society, then for uplifting their society the members of the corporation demand fund for the improvement of roads conditions and the education system of their society. Hence, collecting money only is not the goal of the corporations, but it is also their duty to utilize the fund in the needy areas of the society.
Finally, the members of the corporations are chosen on the basis of their ability that they could contribute for the improvement for their society and look forward for the problems of the every individuals without any biasness. There might also be the problem in the environment, that, the people are cutting the tress, that are being preserved by the government which may lead to the extinction of the animals that are residing there. The member of the corporation should also have to look upon these actions of the individuals and taken legal actions upon this. Hence, it is the duty of the corporations to fulfill the responsibility that they are provided with.
Hence, for these reasons, I agreed upon the statement that, the corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate along with collecting money for these developments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2364.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 484.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88429752066 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91247572617 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.342975206612 0.4932671777 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 744.3 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.0567782103 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.058823529 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4705882353 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 5.21951772744 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295704723029 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132116629486 0.0831039109588 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982265087535 0.0758088955206 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20827620082 0.150359130593 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833447075582 0.0667264976115 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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