Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as

Though many consider corporations shall only focus on making maximum profits as long as they obey the restriction of laws, I hold a different position that corporations are responsible to improve environments as well as societies by the following arguments.

To begin with, it is true that the first priority of companies is to generate maximum profits in a sense of capitalism, but we shall aware the fact that no corporation is isolated from societies and Earth. Hence, the operation of corporations shall not neglect those potential negative effects on the planet and the public even they are not mentioned by laws. A clear example is the Fukushima Nuclear Power Plant Accident. Prior to the risk of radiation leakage, concerns of the cost from shutting down the power plant made the Tokyo Electricity Company decide to continue the operation of the facilities rather than abandon the reactors, eventually leading to a disaster. If the company had considered their responsibilities, such an incident might be avoided.

Through the case of the Fukushima Nuclear Power Plant Accident, we can realize that what is held by believers of capitalism, the invisible hand which modulates the utilities of the system to achieve a maximum of happiness, is not true under all circumstances. So, it is problematic for corporations (even if under the restrictions of laws) to only focus on profit maximization. They should also consider the rest of human beings.

Besides minimizing those negative effects, corporations should also make positive contributions to the world. Because all human beings live on Earth and involve in societies, sustainable environments and sound societies are the foundation for mankind to achieve happiness. As part of humans, corporations are thus with the duties of making a better future for mankind. It is especially true for those large companies having tremendous influences on a global scale, such as Google or Amazon, since their own policies may affect the globe in either good or bad ways. Thus, companies shall consider the benefits of mankind rather than only their own profits.

Another reason of the claim, that corporations must ensure the well-being of societies and environment, is that by making societies/environments better off, companies may establish a higher reputation and ensure the sustainability of natural resources. For example, by providing scholarships to children in the neighborhood, corporations could improve their corporate images. Another good example is using clean energy to minimize negative effects on environments to ensure sustainable environments.

In conclusion, with all the arguments listed above, it is safe for us to state that corporations shall take the responsibilities to promote environments and societies.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, may, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2361.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 433.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45265588915 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22450150898 2.79657885939 115% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528868360277 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 746.1 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2053238632 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.166666667 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0555555556 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 5.21951772744 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247488934481 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692595579307 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551625563556 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131937484249 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518989095879 0.0667264976115 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 100.480337079 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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