Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the wellbeing
of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that
the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to
make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your
own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing
and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The statement shapes that corporations is responsible either for development of societies and environment where they are operating or for making as much money as posible. Whereas, the first mentioned point is view is not always true, while the second one that is related to making making is the always true one. This could be concluded by investigation some of evidences.
For instance, the aim of any organisation in any field is it’s own finance success. Thus, it is always true that corporations are always concerned with their own business development and increase the profits as much as possible as long as it’s within the law and eithical restrains. Perhaps, an organisation develop the well being of it’s society in addition to maximizing the annual profit but it is not logic to only keen about the society development without the support of a strong annual marginal profit.
For example, an organization that perform annual kind of charity works, can not continuuously support this charity performance without enough source of money that exceeds this organisation’s anuual payments for all fields such as salaries, any kind of bills,..etc. Consequently, any organisation is concerned in the first place with increase the financial profit and then society development and any kind of reputational activity.
Conversely, the type of organisation that is based on an external source of financial support for a certain field development of their society, whereas the concern of it would be focused on the best way to use this amount of external money to develop the society as much as it is possible. Therefore, it is not always true that corporations are concerned in the first place by their society development than financial support.
These previously illustrated evidences is a sample of a set of evidences that shapes that any type of corporations would be concerned in the first place to increase their financial profit in order to development it’s own business in the first place and then their society and the other fields under their concern. Consequently, the point of view that state that corporation is more responsible for making as much money as possible is the always true statement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: making
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Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the evidences') or simply say ''some evidences''.
Suggestion: some of the evidences; some evidences
...his could be concluded by investigation some of evidences. For instance, the aim of any organ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, conversely, first, second, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 360.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21111111111 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04772228248 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.419444444444 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2971165903 60.3974514979 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.333333333 118.986275619 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 23.4991977007 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.25 5.21951772744 273% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.093840555558 0.243740707755 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045514300087 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518305348769 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0612486139564 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390783489308 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 14.1392134831 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.