Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Should the development of a society by means of arts be promoted by the government through financial aid? Arts play a very important role in the development of a society. Arts can be any form of aesthetic represention of something done by the people. It could either be a dance form or a painting or some textile work or rather a sculpture.
India, has a plethora of art works which have flourished since many years and are still existing. The state of Gujarat is famous for the textile work. Sarees (a clothing material) come in different forms and some of the most famous are Bandhani and Patoda. These have intricate designs which require a lot of hard work and precision. If the government is financially helping the people who are engaged in this work then these sarees could be available to the common people to wear and appreciate the art work which is inscribed on it.
In ancient times in India, dance forms were basically introduced as a form of entertainment for the kings, gods and godesses. These dance forms then took form of a narration of the epic tales of Mahabharata and Ramayana. It was also believed that performing these dances could help to invoke the deities to gain blessings. Some of these dance forms are Bharatnatyam, Kathak and Kuchipudi. Since these are several years old it would be necessary to preserve the art form for the further generations to know the richness and diversity of their culture. Therefore, government incentives would encourage people to learn. actively participate and spread the knowledge of these art forms.
Europe, is very well famous for the artistic work of the artists like Pablo Picasso and MichaelAngelo. The preservation of the paintings of these and many more talented artists in the form of museums can be witnessed there. The government of Vienna spends significant amount for this purpose. The number of visitors visiting annually keeps incrementing by 10 percent of the previous year subsequently. This aid has helped increase the popularity of these works and has also helped in augmenting the daily income of the households.
On the other hand, a different perspective could be that people are engaged in arts because of their own passion and self-satisfaction. Also, it could be possible that the people developing it do not want to spread it to the common people. In this instance, the funding of government could prove to be a hinderance in the natural flouring of the arts. Making a precious art available to the people could threaten its integrity as others could try to duplicate it and then present it as their own art work.
In sum, the funding of government could either prove to be a boon or bane for the people who are engaged in its creation. However, since works of art are crucial to the development and preservation of a society, their availability to common people would indeed prove to be a boon for the people in the society and across the globe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2440.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 504.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84126984127 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73813722054 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80197791692 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44246031746 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 772.2 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5421935789 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3703703704 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306879825432 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085112788252 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069172958431 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170521596761 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789951105107 0.0667264976115 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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