Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure
that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that
government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own
position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and
supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
“Artistic soul often navigate the delicate balance between their boundless
creativity and the practical realities of financial existence.” Arts and funding
share a complex and interconnected relationship, as the financial support
available for the arts significantly impacts the accessibility, sustainability and
growth of artistic endeavors. Adequate funding plays avital role in nurturing and
expanding the artistic landscape in various ways. So, I mostly agree with the belief
that government funding is necessary to ensure the flourishing of the arts and its
accessibility to all people for several reason.
Many artistic endeavors would be struggled to exist unless adequate funding is
provided to them. Artist, particularly in marginal communities, often face financial
obstacles that impede their ability to focus fully on their artistic creativity. In the
late 20th century and onwards, the advent of digital technology has had a
profound impact on the arts. The availability of computer, internet, digital tools
revolutionized artistic creation. Hence, it compels the artist to be on equal footing
to pull through this competitive market. By providing funding, the government
can help level the playing field and create opportunities for artists who might
otherwise be overlooked or unable to pursue their artistic aspirations.
In addition, for the production of large scale projects which require significant
resources government funding is required. It can benefit both the public and the
artist. For instance, ‘Shilpokola art exhibition’ can be organized to showcase and
promote artistic talent, cultural diversity and creative expression. It provides artist
to display their art to wider audience, allowing them to gain recognition and
potentially sell their artwork. These funds can be used to cover various expenses
associated with organizing an exhibition.
People are not born with equal facilities. The government funding can encourage
the people from each background and promote cultural cohesion. It can, thereby,
enrich society as a whole by preserving authenticity of traditional art from diverse
background. The art can play a vital role in shaping our identity and facilitating the
exchange of idea. So government funding can assure that the facilities of art is
accessible to everyone.
There is an argument that government funding can pressurize the integrity of the
art. There might be political interference on the freedom of the artist. They
claimed that government may dictate the types of art would be worthy of support
which will potentially impede the creativity of the artist. These claims have not
been convincingly refuted. Therefore equality should be maintained between
government funding and artistic autonomy to prevent the deterioration of artistic
expression.
The government funding may impair the integrity of the arts yet the pragmatic
view demonstrate the necessity to ensure the flourishment and accessibility of
arts. In order to restrain the integrity of the art, transparent and independent
fund allotment mechanism should be established. It is crucial to safeguard artistic
autonomy as well as the diversity of artistic expression.
- Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts Write a response in which you d 62
- Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts Write a response in which you d 70
- Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts Write a response in which you d 66
- Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts Write a response in which you d 83
- Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts Write a response in which you d 75
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...ompels the artist to be on equal footing to pull through this competitive market....
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...eate opportunities for artists who might otherwise be overlooked or unable to pur...
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...enticity of traditional art from diverse background. The art can play a vital rol...
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...haping our identity and facilitating the exchange of idea. So government funding ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2792.0 2235.4752809 125% => OK
No of words: 477.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85324947589 5.05705443957 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1661085047 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538784067086 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 861.3 704.065955056 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.9332001935 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.407407407 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18518518519 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 41.0 4.97078651685 825% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 37.0 7.80617977528 474% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368928521125 0.243740707755 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116153130207 0.0831039109588 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103171773779 0.0758088955206 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966661985433 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103215508503 0.0667264976115 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 48.8420337079 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.35 12.1639044944 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 157.0 100.480337079 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.