Some people believe that increasing violence in the media is the cause of increasing violence in our society, especially among children. Others believe that children's peer groups and parental role models are a much more powerful influence on children's behavior.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented above.
While it is an established notion that children often tend to replicate and build on the things that they see and observe in their lives, it certainly does not apply entirely on the media, but rather on their group and parental role models in their lives. Chidren often pickup on the attributes that their parents possess and live upto perfecting it to the best of their ability. It is true that violence among children is developing at an alarming rate, but that certainly does not mean that they tend to pick these negative behavioural traits from the public or the media, but rather from their household and from their friends. As a person, you tend to communicate and live amongst people that you believe in. The same applies to children. Youngsters often associate themselves with a certain people because they like what they are seeing and because they are comfortable around them. You will not find children watching the news or hanging out with random people. Children tend to have role models in their lives. Despite that being a good example of how your children must live, it may also lead to certain problems. No human is perfect and sometimes children pickup on the dirty attributes that you see in yourself. This could also lead to your children becoming violent over a course of time. The environemnt that your children grows up in plays an important role in the person that he or she shapes up to be. For example, if he grows up in a household where the parents constanstly fight, the child might develop an unhealthty opinion on marriage. If left unchecked, children can join a bad gang and develop vice practices like drinking and smoking. It may also lead to things that may be considered worse. They could end up killing people even. A wise man once said " Show me your friends , and I will tell you who you are". Your friends are who you are. You tend to follow their practices because you want to fit in and be loyal to them. This could be a reason as to why children are becoming violent in the society by the day. Parental role models are important figures that children look upto. You, as a parent want what's best for them. But sometimes you may wish to see them develop into the person that you are. If you are Doctor or an Engineer ,etc, good. But imagine if you are a criminal and you wish to see your child grow up into the person that you are. It is therfore important to be the right role model in front of your children , so they grow upto be better human beings.With that being said , it cannot be denied that media also plays a huge role in shaping the future or the character of a child. Although, it may seem unlikely for a child to watch the media , it is not impossible. Violent media in such case can be termed as the cause for an increasing violence in our society, especially among children. If child ends up being influenced by the media and follows them into a riot of sorts. He or she might develop an unhealthy behaviour towards solving problems.In conclusion, while some people might believe that increasing violence in the media is the cause of increasing violence in our society, especially among children. You cannot deny that children's peer groups and parental role models are a much more powerful influcne on the child's behaviour.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 87.0 33.0505617978 263% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2701.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 587.0 442.535393258 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60136286201 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9222030514 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40868278183 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.427597955707 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 828.9 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 6.24550561798 272% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.2439061287 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1290322581 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.935483871 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64516129032 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314078657008 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881978714052 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986575006985 0.0758088955206 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314078657008 0.150359130593 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.8420337079 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.1743820225 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.