Some people believe that increasing violence in the media is the cause of increasing violence in our society, especially among children. Others believe that children's peer groups and parental role models are a much more influence on children's behavior.
The issue says that Some people believe violence in the media is medium of the increasing violance in the society Specialy among childrean. Some people belive that the childern's role modale are the parents this is the most powerful thick in the childran behavior.In this issue I disagree to the author statement because some childrean do not have role modal in the faimily.
It's begin with,Children have the regularly showing the Telivision So do not have assume that the childrean have show the news channel,some childreand showing other TV shows So in this issue author say if media violation is high so it directly affected to the chilren,it is not necceray result about the media.For example Media show that the some people have violation about the government so childrean do not affected if parents says that to children this violation are good or bad. It is the responsibilty of the parents our childrean have learn good things or not about showing the TV.
If childrean have good feeling about the the violation so parent have suggest that this violation are not right and we can not the part of tham. Some parents are aducated so they will be easily explain to the chidren What are bad thing which are the good thing showing any example to the children.
Secondly,If some people have assume that our childrean have role modal is parents,But it is not right think because some children have role modal in our life other people.For example Any childrean Enjoy the Cricket so it's role modal like sachin tendulkar or dhoni etc. not the parents. Some children have role modal have our parents in which condition apply on that my parents are working so good and it is nature is well known so is right some childrean have role modal our parents But not same for all childrean.
Thirdly,Author says that in media violation is more in the TV and some other area so it's directly affected on the childrean but it's not right thich about the assuming the children have get in our life or not. Some people have assume If media is not viloation showing in the TV but Absolte disagree this because Media not show the violation about some people so people have ever that In this area have violated so we don't go to this area,IF any time whether is not bad so media have All news for tham. ANy area have curfue so people have avered that before it's going to this area.
Therefor,I conclude that the Media have the Medium of the violation in the children. Childrean role modal is better so automaticaly It will Catch the new and good ability in our role modal.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'well', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.280082987552 0.240241500013 117% => OK
Verbs: 0.180497925311 0.157235817809 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0643153526971 0.0880659088768 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0726141078838 0.0497285424764 146% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0497925311203 0.0444667217837 112% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116182572614 0.12292977631 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0477178423237 0.0406280797675 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.3897359208 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0145228215768 0.030933414821 47% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.139004149378 0.0997080785238 139% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00622406639004 0.0249443105267 25% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00622406639004 0.0148568991511 42% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2570.0 2732.02544248 94% => OK
No of words: 452.0 452.878318584 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68584070796 6.0361032391 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.276548672566 0.366273622748 76% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.214601769912 0.280924506359 76% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.148230088496 0.200843997647 74% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0973451327434 0.132149295362 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3897359208 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 219.290929204 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.347345132743 0.48968727796 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 38.322509367 55.4138127331 69% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6194690265 68% => OK
Sentence length: 32.2857142857 23.380412469 138% => OK
Sentence length SD: 112.803694396 59.4972553346 190% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.571428571 141.124799967 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2857142857 23.380412469 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.674092028746 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.21349557522 441% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 53.7458912769 51.4728631049 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.46575342466 1.64882698954 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350145823326 0.391690518653 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.249068964265 0.123202303941 202% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.117265981376 0.077325440228 152% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.74101642127 0.547984918172 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.177566320234 0.149214159877 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196153714757 0.161403998019 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988407090171 0.0892212321368 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.434694031606 0.385218514788 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.117326711159 0.0692045440612 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25791994363 0.275328986314 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719640594942 0.0653680567796 110% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.