Some people believe it is often necessary, even desirable, for political leaders to withhold information from the public. Others believe that the public has a right to be fully informed.
Politicians have a responsibility to the people that elect them into power. By keeping the people fully informed of his or her actions, a foundation of trust is established, and depending on his or hers, can be favorable. But if a politician were to be insular about his or her intentions, people will begin to feel dubious of their actions. Non-communication that occurs to lead to disastrous events for the country as a whole and for the political leader as well. It is in the best interest of the political leader to be open and honest of ones intentions, achieving positive feedback loop between the leader and the people.
Prior to being elected in a position of power, politicians promote themselves by adhering and sympathizing with the woes of the people. The people that elect the leader genuinely believe that the leader can bring about change. Keeping them in the dark about their decisions once being elected would only cause a rift in the relationship of the people and the leader. The support of people for the leader would decline, and it would be difficult for the leader to stay in power.
Take the Watergate scandal as an example. Before the event took place, a majority of the people decried the violence and depravity of the Vietnam War. One of Richard Nixon's goals as a president was to end the Vietnam War once and for all. However, his time as president was filled with secrecy, his actions deceptive and illegal. Excuses were used to cover up the real intents and the war only elongated under his presidency, resulting in heavy economic consequences and social disruption at home and abroad. After the scandal was revealed in full light to the public, the people were enraged at his decisions. They realized that Nixon had no intention to end the war and that the tactics Nixon used were highly immoral and unfit for a leader. This embarrassing event destroyed his national image and he resigned shortly afterwards.
For a politician to not allow the public to be informed of their decisions is poor way to be a leader. Thus, it is always in the best interest of a leader to be open about their intensions and decisions.
- In any field of inquiry the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions 62
- Some people believe it is often necessary even desirable for political leaders to withhold information from the public Others believe that the public has a right to be fully informed 50
- College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 543, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...litical leader to be open and honest of ones intentions, achieving positive feedback...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, thus, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 374.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75935828877 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70678579748 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483957219251 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2373630959 60.3974514979 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.6842105263 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6842105263 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.05263157895 5.21951772744 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237996222545 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742575885879 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705006812286 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159725760315 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614434655897 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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