Some people believe it is often necessary, even desirable, for political leaders to withhold information from the public. Others believe that the public has a right to be fully informed.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Whether the public can approach to the information that political leaders have, could be a debatable issue as some may argue that the public should not be aware of every information that leaders have, while others may say that public should know everything. Each side has their own grounds and has their own strengths and weaknesses. From deciding from the two options, I would argue that there are types of information and some are not adequate for the public; that information should not be acknowledged to them, while other information should clearly showed to the public.
First, there are some information, when released could yield some danger; that danger could be for some group of people or the entire public. For example, covert operations should not be acknowledged to everyone as the operators will be compromised. Although the world without any such jobs would be wonderful but the time has not moved toward that side. We are living in this world that requires such operations. To disclose such information would be dangerous. Moreover, information regarding terrorist should also not be disclosed because terrorist can easily penetrate the national security with given information. Small groups are relatively easier to change their plans compared to larger organization, the country. This would end up in a disaster for the public. For these information, the public may not have access to for better results.
However, other information should publicly acknowledged. Political leaders may corrupt and they always need to be in check. As leaders has more authority and power, as they are leading the organization, that could mean that with more power they can ruin the organization with given power. Leaders can improve the organization, but at the same time they can more easily ruin their organization. If the organization is the country and the leader is political leaders, then the failure would mean the end of that country. History has thought us the lesson that political leaders can easily make their people miserable. They should be always in check from the public and public need information in order to do that. The case of Argentina and Nixon come to mind. Without public attention, leaders can easily fall into wrong answers.
Last but not least, public need to be informed so that they can make better choices and know better about themselves. Without objective information such as statistics, public while in democratic country they have hard time deciding their future; no information means no standards to compare. If people have more knowledge about themselves and how the country is working out based on the information they can get from their leaders, then they can also think and surmise their future. If political leaders do not open any information to the public, then public will not know how they are doing. We always need objective feedback so that we can look ourselves in a objective way. Not only the leaders should be objectively supervised, the public should also aware of themselves. The one of the best ways to do it is with the help of objective information. It would be hard for the public to gain information by themselves as they do not poss the prowess that the leaders have.
In conclusion, I contend that the public should have full access to the information that the leaders have with some exceptions in information regarding national security. The public and the leaders should always look out for what they are doing wrong. Everyone needs check and balance with feedback, with information to not to make a wrong decisions.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
no serious flaws found.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 32 15
No. of Words: 592 350
No. of Characters: 2926 1500
No. of Different Words: 223 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.933 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.943 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.577 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 202 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 139 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 95 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 74 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.507 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.594 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.306 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.446 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.099 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 555, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'show'
Suggestion: show
... while other information should clearly showed to the public. First, there are some ...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 775, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...nd up in a disaster for the public. For these information, the public may not have access to for ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'acknowledge'
Suggestion: acknowledge
...ever, other information should publicly acknowledged. Political leaders may corrupt and they...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 657, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a objective way" with adverb for "objective"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... feedback so that we can look ourselves in a objective way. Not only the leaders should be objecti...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 660, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...edback so that we can look ourselves in a objective way. Not only the leaders sho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 43.0 12.4196629213 346% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 33.0505617978 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 12.9106741573 225% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2994.0 2235.4752809 134% => OK
No of words: 592.0 442.535393258 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05743243243 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93265142912 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69164969604 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.393581081081 0.4932671777 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 921.6 704.065955056 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.9206124771 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5625 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.59375 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254587252465 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835603712981 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643377032043 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176646901641 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382191109509 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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