Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
In democratic society, government officials are often held responsible for their decisions related to their office duty. If they failed to perform their duties and satisfy their constituencies, they may lose the next election. Therefore, some people believe that government officials should make their decisions according to the will of the people instead of making their own judgments over different issues. In my opinion, government officials should always consult the public opinions when formulating important policies. Nevertheless, it is not reasonable to carry people’s will unquestioningly because over important issues people are often divided and poorly informed. Therefore, government officials should do their jobs by taking into account various factors and let the people decide if they did a satisfactory job overall in the next election.
To begin with, I strongly believe that government officials should consult the public frequently and systematically before introducing important policies. For one thing, the government officials should always take into account the people’s opinions when developing relevant policies in order to better meet the needs of the people. For example, before the Hong Kong government decides to tighten the ban on smoking in public space, it has run a public consultation for over 3 months to collect people’s opinions on this issue. A better understanding of what people think about the issue can inform the
policy-making process. In addition, hearing people’s voices on the proposed policy will further legitimize the policy and make it easy for the government to later enforce the policy. The ban of smoking, for example, would be much easier if the society has reached a consensus about the issue.
Nevertheless, it is unrealistic to expect the government officials to follow people’s will blindly because people are often divided over important social issues. For example, gay and lesbian marriage has been a hot issue in the United States in recent years. While more and more Americans have become tolerant of homosexual couples, there are still a significant group of conservatives who oppose fiercely the idea of gay and lesbian marriage. Given the deep disputes over the issue, it is not possible for the government to “carry out people’s will” because there is no consensus in the society on this issue. The government will always be against certain people’s will no matter what it does. Ultimately, the government officials have to make their own judgments taking into the account the public opinions, the laws as well as the overall public interests.
Another reason why the government officials should not make decisions solely based on people’s will is that the members of the public are often notoriously ill-informed on some important issues, especially when it comes to science and technology. For example, despite the advance of genetic engineering in the past decades, the public has harbored a general fear of genetically modified food. If policies are to be made according to people’s opinions, no GM food would be allowed in the market in order to please the people who are ignorant of the science behind GM food. But GM food is arguably one of the most important inventions in late 20th century, which has the potential to address many problems such as environmental pollution, food crisis in the developing world and energy crisis. Prohibiting GM food would be a grave mistake of any governments despite the public skepticism and misgivings.
In conclusion, while the government officials should always take into account public opinions when making decisions, they should not carry out people’s will unquestioningly because the public is often divided and ill-informed over different issues. The government officials should ultimately rely on their own judgments when developing the policies and let the public to decide if they have done a good overall job in the next election.
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... good overall job in the next election.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'in addition', 'such as', 'as well as', 'for one thing', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.257931034483 0.240241500013 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.140689655172 0.157235817809 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0896551724138 0.0880659088768 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0524137931034 0.0497285424764 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.031724137931 0.0444667217837 71% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111724137931 0.12292977631 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0455172413793 0.0406280797675 112% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.97229802988 2.79330140395 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0262068965517 0.030933414821 85% => OK
Particles: 0.00413793103448 0.0016655270985 248% => OK
Determiners: 0.0993103448276 0.0997080785238 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.031724137931 0.0249443105267 127% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0151724137931 0.0148568991511 102% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 4301.0 2732.02544248 157% => OK
No of words: 627.0 452.878318584 138% => OK
Chars per words: 6.85964912281 6.0361032391 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.00399520894 4.58838876751 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.444976076555 0.366273622748 121% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.320574162679 0.280924506359 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.228070175439 0.200843997647 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.175438596491 0.132149295362 133% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97229802988 2.79330140395 106% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 219.290929204 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.421052631579 0.48968727796 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.1134500322 55.4138127331 92% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6194690265 121% => OK
Sentence length: 25.08 23.380412469 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3457614027 59.4972553346 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.04 141.124799967 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.08 23.380412469 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.674092028746 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 226.0 5.21349557522 4335% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 57.1374162679 51.4728631049 111% => OK
Elegance: 1.84662576687 1.64882698954 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424245843302 0.391690518653 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118763840969 0.123202303941 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0668226472053 0.077325440228 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.560695562956 0.547984918172 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147678299339 0.149214159877 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185809085452 0.161403998019 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065048597777 0.0892212321368 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.479094936701 0.385218514788 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0433014092282 0.0692045440612 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306701480982 0.275328986314 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609458482166 0.0653680567796 93% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.30420353982 189% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 3.66592920354 246% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.5995575221 162% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.