Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
The characterisctic of every society depends of numerous factors. To determine the main feature of every society, some people opine that we should take into acount the major cities because they represent the overall state of the country,while others claim that every small city plays important role in demonstaring the country as a whole. In my opinion, to reach a fair and reliable concusion with regards to the main features of every country,both major cities and small ones as well as vilages shoud be evaluated simultaneously.
Undoubtedly,village and rural areas of every country carry the most indigenous culture of the country.cultural heritage of a society lies in rural areas, because they treasure their old conventions, music, clothing, dance and language.Therefore, they play integral role in defining the identity of the society.On the other hand, economic status of villages are far dissimilar with major cities. people of rural areas suffer from unemployment, lack of health care and educational infrastructure. Hence, to determine the overall condition of the country from economic and social viewpoint rular areas play indispensable roles.
having said that, major cities are the main drive of every country from several aspests.Young generation tend to migrate to big cities in order to find jobs and have better recreational hobbies.On the other hand, the celebrities and eminent individuals of every country live in the big cities.Therefore, these places supply heterogeneous mixture of people from different nationalities, ages and culture.The more cosmopolitan a city, the more modern it becoomes. Additionally, the overall economic condition in big cities is better than small ones because they incorporate more companies and industrial factories. As a result, major cities differ significantlty from urban arears from cultural, social, and economic statets. And entail many spesific feature that are hard to find in small cities.
In summary,in assessing a society's characteristics, officials should adopt a holistic view in order to reach valid result. Both major cities and rural areas are supplied with significant features which are worth examining.
- To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In deve 54
- To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In deve 66
- Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently 16
- Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archa 82
- Although many people think that the luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life areentirely harmless, they in fact, prevent people from developing into truly strong andindependent individuals." 16
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, in summary, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 330.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62121212121 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26773609301 2.79657885939 117% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548484848485 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 123.772949612 60.3974514979 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.583333333 118.986275619 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.21951772744 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.046298700992 0.243740707755 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0163061524244 0.0831039109588 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0172197296782 0.0758088955206 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0296019770602 0.150359130593 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0122068181911 0.0667264976115 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 14.1392134831 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 48.8420337079 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.1639044944 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.38706741573 119% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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