Some people believe that success in creative fields, such as painting, fiction writing, and
filmmaking, primarily requires hard work and perseverance. Others believe that such
success mainly requires innate talents that cannot be learned.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own
position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and
supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Many would say that to success in creative fields, one should have to born with an innate talent. In some senses, this position is understandable because people who have innate talents learn skills in extraordinary speed and sometimes create new things that have never exist before. However, I still believe that in most cases hard work and perseverence is a key to success before creative works require a myriad of practice.
Unlike most people's misconception, arts is not about creative a entirely new thing but reform and modify works that already existed. Of course, there are some materpieces from people who born to be genious, which are both innovative and extraordinary. However, in a general creative field, public do not require such a masterpiece. Instead, they require art works that they easily appreciate and understand, and those arts can be created by artists who incisely investigate style that people like and modify them in their own way. For example, many movies which make a lot of profit were inspired by some masterpiece. Even though some critics blame the directors not to be creative, many people like those movies and go to see the movies. In this regard, in terms of economic success and fame, artists do not necessarily have innate faculties.
Moreover, artistic works require sophisticated techniques that can only be achieved by a lot of practice. According to Immersion, the author insists that everyone needs 10,000 hours to be successful in one's field. Bettles To be specific, painters need to learn how to draw painting just like they look. For example, Picaso who are famous for being creative and master of impressionism had been very good at portraits before he started being creative. Similarily, many writers copy tons of books for practive purpose, learning basic rules of writing. Filmmakers also begin with how to cut the movies and how to prepare customs, stuffs for scenes. All of which can be harsh, thus only deligent people can survive in a such field.
In a nutshell, I think the importance of being perserverence in any field overweigh the importance of innate talents to succeed. This is because any successful art works made by modification of original arts and sophisticated techniques, which can be obtains with individual's endeavors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
...times create new things that have never exist before. However, I still believe that i...
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Line 9, column 63, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...sconception, arts is not about creative a entirely new thing but reform and modif...
^
Line 17, column 203, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... needs 10,000 hours to be successful in ones field. Bettles To be specific, painters...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, thus, for example, i think, of course, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 376.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17287234043 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79378265742 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9542619323 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.368421053 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7894736842 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2590370908 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780969477601 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052177088438 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159849118733 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605102852839 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.