Some people claim that you can tell whether a nation is great by looking at the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists. Others argue that the surest indicator of a great nation is, in fact, the general welfare of all its people.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Imagine a horrible military dictatorship in which the ruling people have great achievements. Maybe those achievements serve to preserve the status quo. Who knows? it is a military regime so there is no free press and no liberty to think or act according to one’s beliefs. It is pretty clear that a country will be seen as a great nation not by looking at the achievements of its rulers and preeminent persons. Instead it will be by the general welfare of its people and I feel that way mainly for the reasons that will be explored in the following essay. First, the power concentration in the hand of few might bias what those people can actually achieve. Second, by a more epistemological point of view, a nation is considered to be a group of people with the same traditions. Finally, who can determine if someone’s achievements are great enough?
To begin, in autocratic regimes almost all the power and resources are concentered, so there is no equality of opportunities. Besides that, countries like Saudi Arabia or the United Arab Emirates may be rich, but the income concentration is so extreme that those countries figure among the lowest countries on the Gini index ranks. That scenario has a direct impact on what the richest people can do. It can even be only a matter of propaganda to sustain their power! That is not what our occidental and democratic societies desire and hope for when asked about what makes a great nation.
Further, considering what nation means, it should be even more clear that a country cannot be great if its people welfare is not high enough. that is, what is a nation if not the sum of its territory and its residents? How can a nation be seen as a good nation if its people live in misery conditions? A country cannot be great if there is poverty, lack of access to health services or even poor education! What should matter more when judging if a nation is great if not the living condition of its people?
Moreover, how can we delegate the ability to claim that someone has done great things in life? is that judgment free of any bias? Of course not! As human beings we are not impartial. it is impossible to fully separate our opinion from our personal baggage. Our life experiences matter, so no one should judge the other’s achievements. In other words, how can we determine if a nation is great or not only relying on someone else thoughs? That will be surely biased!
I can concede that I might seem logical at first glance to claim whether a nation is great by looking at the achievements of its distinguished leaders. Specially if the nation model that we have in mind is a capitalist democracy. However, it is important to acknowledge that there is other type of nation in the world, and that a simple view as that may impose severe consequences for those nations’ future. Therefore, to consider a nation as a great nation, the best indicator should be the welfare of its people.
- The following appeared in a memo from a vice president of a large, highly diversified company."Ten years ago our company had two new office buildings constructed as regional headquarters for two regions. The buildings were erected by different constr 49
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you t 66
- In order for any work of art — for example, a film, a novel, a poem, or a song — to have merit, it must be understandable to most people.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain you 50
- Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and support 66
- Some people claim that you can tell whether a nation is great by looking at the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists. Others argue that the surest indicator of a great nation is, in fact, the general welfare of all its people.Write a respons 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... to preserve the status quo. Who knows? it is a military regime so there is no fre...
^^
Line 1, column 416, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...s of its rulers and preeminent persons. Instead it will be by the general welfare of it...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 607, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun might seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little might'.
Suggestion: little might
... the power concentration in the hand of few might bias what those people can actually ach...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 143, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
... its people welfare is not high enough. that is, what is a nation if not the sum of ...
^^^^
Line 13, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Is
... someone has done great things in life? is that judgment free of any bias? Of cour...
^^
Line 13, column 146, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...dgment free of any bias? Of course not! As human beings we are not impartial. it i...
^^
Line 13, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...! As human beings we are not impartial. it is impossible to fully separate our opi...
^^
Line 13, column 472, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se thoughs? That will be surely biased! I can concede that I might seem logical ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, i feel, of course, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 19.5258426966 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2457.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 520.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.725 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77746572047 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471153846154 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 783.9 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5534798109 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353785995271 0.243740707755 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102573681297 0.0831039109588 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094236094617 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21642925659 0.150359130593 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112280986526 0.0667264976115 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.