Some people think shopping online is better, while other prefers going to the shops. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People are now getting familiar with buying thing on website instead of having a choice in a shop. It is probably due to selling methods are favourably changing day by day. However, some buyers still prefer window shopping as an interesting hobby. In this essay, I will consider each of these opinions and give my own view.
An initial advantage of online shops is its convenience. Just a blink an eye, consumers can find particular items which are displayed on supplier's websites. The sellers are willing to provide necessary information such as sort of item, price, size, delivery, payment condition, etc... to catch up with various requirements. Eventhough, someone is living in Vietnam but he wants to get a Ninewest shoes from the US, he such do access the website of Ninewest to choose model, suitable size and makes a purchase order. All his needs can be satisfied in distance.
Another issue is that customer services are always available to delivery throughout 24 hours per day and 7 days per week. Especially, at the time of Corona pandemic, human acitivities have been changed the methods into social spacing, means why distance purchasing becomes more important. Moreover, the suppliers cooperate with banks to develop a variety of express payments in order to serve the demands.
Turning to other side of argument, online shopping may cause some troubles. Sometimes shoppers have to wait for delivery for several days and sometimes the goods are not what they want. In addition, traditional trading which is often specialized in a particular area has already been outstanding and useful. For instance, in music shop, the staffs are very knowledgeable about music and instruments. Buyers can get advice before buying.
To sum up, I think digital shopping could be a progressive trend in upcoming years and bring to shoppers interesting experiences. Besides, traditional shops will always be a place for people who require luxury and unique items to visit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 467, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to model'
Suggestion: to model
...ccess the website of Ninewest to choose model, suitable size and makes a purchase ord...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, may, moreover, so, still, for instance, i think, in addition, sort of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 322.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13043478261 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7610983703 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67701863354 0.4932671777 137% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4786017989 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188896954371 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527150691769 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709424725013 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101188855932 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746391136956 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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