“Students should fund their education with part-time work that they do while they study.”
Being able to fund one’s own education is a very big thing in a young adult’s life. But there are several factors that are to be taken into consideration. For example, the total cost of attendance of the university, the possibility of him/her securing a decent paying job in order to pay off their tuition and other expenses etc.
Generally speaking, I believe that it is better for parents to fund the education of their children rather than the latter ones themselves, particularly if they are studying at universities that have a higher overall cost of attendance.
First of all, it’s important to consider the impact on academics. Because of the exorbitant tuition fees the universities demand, young adult who needs to finance his/her education will have to work outside in some firm taking out some part of his/her time in the day out of academics. Generally, this turns into a burden for the student finding it difficult to strike a balance between work and studies. This would eventually lead to downfall in their grades. Nevertheless, there are examples of many students who have been able to finance their education by work off part time and simultaneously were able to secure decent grades at their schools.
In addition to the importance of academics, it might affect the young adult’s health. The students might not be able to earn enough to eat healthy, which in turn has a detrimental effect on their health. This increases the expenditure towards medication and other miscellaneous expenses. However, I have seen people who were able to take good care of their health, despite working part time. One such example, a friend of mine who used to cook food at his dorm because of his previous experience in cooking that he had. This helped him cut down his expenses by a great amount when it came to spending money at restaurants etc.
Finally, psychological condition of the young adult might also get affected. Neither able to make enough money to pay off the house rent, tuition fees and other basic necessities, nor able to secure good grades at school and finally dropping out of school has become a very common thing these days. This might put the young adult into a psychological turmoil and might lead to depression. I would like to point out that, the universities generally provide the students with a personal academic advisor who can be of great help when a student is facing difficulties with his/her grades as they could suggest tips and tricks to score better, appoint a one-to-one mentoring if necessary. Universities even have student support teams that counsel students facing depression or any other psychological conditions.
By way of conclusion, based on the arguments explored above, I’m of the opinion that in most of the cases its actually more beneficial for parents to finance the education of their children.
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Suggestion: part-time
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Suggestion: part-time
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Suggestion:
...me to spending money at restaurants etc. Finally, psychological condition of the ...
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
... the house rent, tuition fees and other basic necessities, nor able to secure good grades at scho...
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Suggestion: it's; it is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, for example, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2403.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 480.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00625 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80948835669 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 758.7 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6606351069 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04761904762 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198750871474 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563826805727 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596093866905 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112727012621 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416034790525 0.0667264976115 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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