Studying foodways—what foods people eat and how they produce, acquire, prepare, and
consume them—is the best way to gain deep understanding of a culture.
The author believes that the best way to gain deep understanding of a culture is by studying foodways-what people eat and how they produce, acquire, prepare and consume them. However, I completely disagree with the statement above as the author unnecessarily narrowed the statement by saying the "best" way to know about any culture is their foodways.
There are various kinds of foods people adapted in this world and it depends upon many factors. People eat different types of foods like vegetables, sea-food, birds like chickens, crow, or other animals like cow, goat,etc. However, adapting this food style depends upon many things. For example, if some are have good farming lands and facilities then people around it consume most of vegetables in their diet, or if any area near by ocean consumes more sea-food. Therefore, we can assume little idea about the people by their geographic location and avalibilities around them, though, it doesn't provide any furthur details about their culture.
In ancient time, man used to acquire his food by hunting animals himself and prepare his food by using very limited indgredients, like vegetable oil, tree oil, tree leaves, etc, by roasting the raw meat or sometimes directly consume it. However, years by years, cooking and the methods of producing dishes have been improvised drastically. Today we know that there are tons of factories who capture there animals and some actually breed these animals and run bussiness of different kinds of meats. Today's man doesn't go out to hunt for any animal like ancient time. He can get any kind of meat from super market and cook it in microwave within hour. Addmittly we cannot conclude the most information about one's culture by just knowing how he acquires or prepare his food as people in cities have monolithic life-style.
Human has been developing and adapting technologies that make their lives easy. People tends to adapt easy and time saving techniques to cook their food. In this busy world, many people actually do not even have time to cook. In many metropolitan cities people used to eat in restaurants or order food at home. However, people doesn't eat same food daily as they got many different options.
All in all, the foodways fail to provide details to understand and get deep knowledge about any culture. However, foodways can give little bit information about their life-styles but it certainly not the best way to gain profound understanding of a culture.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 186, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es, sea-food, birds like chickens, crow, or other animals like cow, goat,etc. How...
^^
Line 4, column 219, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
..., crow, or other animals like cow, goat,etc. However, adapting this food style depe...
^^^^
Line 4, column 310, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...n many things. For example, if some are have good farming lands and facilities then ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 379, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the vegetables') or simply say ''most vegetables''.
Suggestion: most of the vegetables; most vegetables
...acilities then people around it consume most of vegetables in their diet, or if any area near by o...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 428, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...egetables in their diet, or if any area near by ocean consumes more sea-food. Therefore...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 591, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...d avalibilities around them, though, it doesnt provide any furthur details about their...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 135, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...by using very limited indgredients, like vegetable oil, tree oil, tree leaves, et...
^^
Line 6, column 511, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...of different kinds of meats. Todays man doesnt go out to hunt for any animal like anci...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 328, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... or order food at home. However, people doesnt eat same food daily as they got many di...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 367, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... doesnt eat same food daily as they got many different options. All in all, the foodways fa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 133, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...any culture. However, foodways can give little bit information about their life-styles but...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2082.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 409.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09046454768 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63515696373 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542787286064 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6545901178 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.1 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.45 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361190522773 0.243740707755 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10426684558 0.0831039109588 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145951057332 0.0758088955206 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207088457198 0.150359130593 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123752408954 0.0667264976115 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 186, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es, sea-food, birds like chickens, crow, or other animals like cow, goat,etc. How...
^^
Line 4, column 219, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
..., crow, or other animals like cow, goat,etc. However, adapting this food style depe...
^^^^
Line 4, column 310, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...n many things. For example, if some are have good farming lands and facilities then ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 379, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the vegetables') or simply say ''most vegetables''.
Suggestion: most of the vegetables; most vegetables
...acilities then people around it consume most of vegetables in their diet, or if any area near by o...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 428, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...egetables in their diet, or if any area near by ocean consumes more sea-food. Therefore...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 591, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...d avalibilities around them, though, it doesnt provide any furthur details about their...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 135, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...by using very limited indgredients, like vegetable oil, tree oil, tree leaves, et...
^^
Line 6, column 511, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...of different kinds of meats. Todays man doesnt go out to hunt for any animal like anci...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 328, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... or order food at home. However, people doesnt eat same food daily as they got many di...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 367, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... doesnt eat same food daily as they got many different options. All in all, the foodways fa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 133, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...any culture. However, foodways can give little bit information about their life-styles but...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2082.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 409.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09046454768 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63515696373 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542787286064 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6545901178 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.1 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.45 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361190522773 0.243740707755 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10426684558 0.0831039109588 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145951057332 0.0758088955206 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207088457198 0.150359130593 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123752408954 0.0667264976115 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.