"Success in any realm of life comes more often from taking chances or risks than from careful and cautious planning."
failures are the stepping stones to success. The prompt suggests that success comes from being audacious rather than being careful with everything and playing a safe game. In my opinion, I agree with that suggestion and argue that people must be willing to take risks than being cautious about everything they do.
success of a person doesn’t happen overnight. there will be a number of a failure stories before achieving success. A person can learn something from his mistakes but how can mistakes happen if he is not willing to take risks. A mistake can happen only if there is a risk involved because taking a risk leads to number of consequences and some or at the other point there will be a flaw. this mistake becomes an experience. this is a self learning cycle. For instance, Steve Jobs failed number of time before finding apple. he was even opted out by the board member but he came back stronger than ever and he invented a mobile which is famously known as apple. The mentioned example suggests that it is the mistakes that teaches the lesson and makes a person stronger.
Further, no one can predict a future accurately. being very cautious and careful just because of the fear of failure doesn’t make a successful person. No journey is smooth and nothing in this world is simple. Everyone should cross the hurdles in their life and should deal with their problems. what is life if there are no mistakes to learn, be it professional or personal? For example, an employee learns from a mistake he committed and has a better chance of growing big than an employee who will just be careful to avoid mistakes. people should take risks and learn from their mistakes. but that doesn’t mean they can do the same mistake twice. they have to learn from that mistake and should be flexible enough to deal with a similar problem.
being careful in planning is not a disadvantage. there are number of success stories where having cautious planning has given very good results. but there is a little scope of learning. With no mistakes committed there is no flexibility in dealing with a complex situation. A person who dealt with a number of mistakes will be flexible enough to confront with a situation.
At the end, everything is dependent on a person’s perspective. A person will be happy if he gets a limited success what he thought. but a person who wants to get to a higher success he must do mistake and he must learn from them. A person’s exposure to problems will only be experienced when he takes risk and deals with them. Thus, it is important to take risks rather than being careful about every action.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2199.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 462.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75974025974 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59267697825 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450216450216 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 674.1 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7812848117 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.935483871 118.986275619 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.9032258065 23.4991977007 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90322580645 5.21951772744 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 5.13820224719 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171996075414 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512742311421 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530772369664 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11564436317 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505904380398 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 14.1392134831 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.38706741573 82% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.