Supercorp recently moved its headquarters to corporateville. The recent surges in the number of homeowners in corporateville prove that corporateville is a superior place to live then middleburg, the home of supercorp’s current headquarters. Moreover middleburg is a predominately urban area and according to an employee survey, supercorp has determined that its workers prefer to live in an area that is not urban. Finally corporateville has lower taxes than middlesburg, making it not only a safer place to work but also a cheaper one. Therefore, supercorp clearly made the best dicision.
“Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumption of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on assumptions and what the implication are if the assumptions prove unwarranted”
according to the statement, supercorps moved their headquarters from middleburg(past home of supercorp's headquarters) to the corporateville(present home of supercorp headquarters). it is also stated that employee survey is conducted which shows that employees prefer to live an area which is not urban. so they lower taxes of corporateville than middleburg which makes corporteville safer and cheaper place to work.there may be some positive and negative affects of this change but positive effects outweighs negative affects after thorough interpretation.so,after brief analysis i came to the point that supercorp made the correct decision.
first of all, with the shift of headquarters overall development of the region increase as it was first established only to one part but by this decision overall region's development increase.moreover in a region which is less urbane than other there is also less disturbance like traffic jams and other problems which affect organization.so, this decision is best by looking at the above mentioned aspects.
moreover,from the study provided in the statement we came to know that majority of employees also wanted to go to the non urban place.so, by this dicision employees also get motivated that their voice is heard in the organization and they work with more passionate manner than ever for development of organization.so, employee moral also increase with this recent change.this further increase the market image of the organization due to which more people want to join the organization.so, these effects also support the dicision.
further, we also know that population of corporateville is increasing at higher rate than that of middlesburg. so with establishment of organiztion in the middlesburg there is also increase in employment rate and economy of the overall region also increases.additionally regional development also increase than ever with this change. this result in overall balance of economy and development in the region.
so after detailed analysis, we came to the conclusion that decision made by the organization is best which helps in development of organization and the region and in addition economy of the region also get balanced.another good result of this dicision is increase in employee morale which increase their reputation among other competitive organizations.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'in addition', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.273209549072 0.240241500013 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.143236074271 0.157235817809 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0901856763926 0.0880659088768 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0689655172414 0.0497285424764 139% => OK
Pronouns: 0.026525198939 0.0444667217837 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.153846153846 0.12292977631 125% => OK
Participles: 0.0318302387268 0.0406280797675 78% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.57803868244 2.79330140395 128% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0318302387268 0.030933414821 103% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.100795755968 0.0997080785238 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0026525198939 0.0249443105267 11% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0238726790451 0.0148568991511 161% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2353.0 2732.02544248 86% => OK
No of words: 356.0 452.878318584 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.6095505618 6.0361032391 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.373595505618 0.366273622748 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.314606741573 0.280924506359 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.255617977528 0.200843997647 127% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.174157303371 0.132149295362 132% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.57803868244 2.79330140395 128% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 219.290929204 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480337078652 0.48968727796 98% => OK
Word variations: 49.9497941175 55.4138127331 90% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6194690265 44% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 39.5555555556 23.380412469 169% => OK
Sentence length SD: 147.011547375 59.4972553346 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 261.444444444 141.124799967 185% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.5555555556 23.380412469 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.11111111111 0.674092028746 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.21349557522 307% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 71.0162297129 51.4728631049 138% => OK
Elegance: 1.92222222222 1.64882698954 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418168075511 0.391690518653 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.226328344229 0.123202303941 184% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.137331167866 0.077325440228 178% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.731380413844 0.547984918172 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.223950851899 0.149214159877 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.225212795333 0.161403998019 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774535965883 0.0892212321368 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.389359433517 0.385218514788 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0688943377533 0.0692045440612 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28083994804 0.275328986314 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664694023934 0.0653680567796 102% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 13.5995575221 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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