As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of
humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
In recent centuries, humans have developed the technology very rapidly, and you may
accept some merit of it, and you may see a distortion in society occured by it. To be
lazy for human in some meaning is one of the fashion issues in thesedays. There are
many symptoms and resons of it. However, I can not agree with the statement that the
technology make humans to be reluctant to thinkng thoroughly.
Of course, you can see the phenomena of human laziness along with developed
technology in some place. However, they would happen in specific condition, not
general. What makes human to be laze of thinking is not merely technology, but the
the tendency of human that they treat them as a magic stick and a black box. Not
understanding the aims and theory of them couses the disapproval problems.
The most important thing to use the thechnology, regardless the new or old, is to
comprehend the fundamental idea of them, and to adapt suit tech to tasks in need.
Even if you recognize a method as a all-mighty and it is extremely over-spec to your
needs, you can not see the result you want. In this procedure, humans have to consider
as long as possible to acquire adequate functions. Therefore, humans can not escape
from using their brain.
In addition, the technology as it is do not vain automatically, the is created by
humans. Thus, the more developed tech and the more you want a convenient life,
the more you think and emmit your creativity to breakthrough some banal method
sarcastically.
Consequently, if you are not passive to the new tech, but offensive to it, you would
not lose your ability to think deeply. Furthermore, you may improve the ability by
adopting it.
- Supercorp recently moved its headquarters to corporateville. The recent surges in the number of homeowners in corporateville prove that corporateville is a superior place to live then middleburg, the home of supercorp’s current headquarters. Moreover 50
- The following appeared as part of an article in a magazine devoted to regionallife.“Corporations should look to the city of Helios when seeking new businessopportunities or a new location. Even in the recent recession, Helios’sunemployment rate was lo 50
- The following appeared in an announcement issued by the publisher of TheMercury, a weekly newspaper.“Since a competing lower-priced newspaper, The Bugle, was started five years ago,The Mercury’s circulation has declined by 10,000 readers. The best way 50
- The following appeared as part of an article in a magazine devoted to regionallife.“Corporations should look to the city of Helios when seeking new businessopportunities or a new location. Even in the recent recession, Helios’sunemployment rate was lo 41
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability ofhumans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 80, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... thinking is not merely technology, but the the tendency of human that they treat them ...
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Line 8, column 80, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... thinking is not merely technology, but the the tendency of human that they treat them ...
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Line 13, column 35, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...eed. Even if you recognize a method as a all-mighty and it is extremely over-spe...
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Line 17, column 38, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
.... In addition, the technology as it is do not vain automatically, the is created ...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'in addition', 'of course']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.174698795181 0.240241500013 73% => OK
Verbs: 0.14156626506 0.157235817809 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0843373493976 0.0880659088768 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0843373493976 0.0497285424764 170% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0843373493976 0.0444667217837 190% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.102409638554 0.12292977631 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0210843373494 0.0406280797675 52% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80163937913 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0451807228916 0.030933414821 146% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0963855421687 0.0997080785238 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0271084337349 0.0249443105267 109% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00301204819277 0.0148568991511 20% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1697.0 2732.02544248 62% => OK
No of words: 294.0 452.878318584 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77210884354 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.58838876751 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.292517006803 0.366273622748 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.227891156463 0.280924506359 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.180272108844 0.200843997647 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.136054421769 0.132149295362 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80163937913 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 219.290929204 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530612244898 0.48968727796 108% => OK
Word variations: 53.7651693239 55.4138127331 97% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 18.375 23.380412469 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1811814628 59.4972553346 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0625 141.124799967 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 23.380412469 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6875 0.674092028746 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.94800884956 424% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 41.1641156463 51.4728631049 80% => OK
Elegance: 0.961165048544 1.64882698954 58% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294227091632 0.391690518653 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110927885022 0.123202303941 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0670271928519 0.077325440228 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.733345269296 0.547984918172 134% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.291015480045 0.149214159877 195% => Sentences are changing often in a paragraphs.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116156245409 0.161403998019 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783033035799 0.0892212321368 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.119891418698 0.385218514788 31% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0844876052167 0.0692045440612 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114962343507 0.275328986314 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062995534076 0.0653680567796 96% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.