General perception that a great nation lies in its ruler’s capability and their wealth, artists who produce mesmerizing arts, scientists who goes to an extent of inventing or discovering, by extension, other countries use these inventions there by generating revenue and fame to the nation. However, to be considered as a great nation these are some of the many ways but not the sole ways.
Firstly, the basic needs of a man are food, clothing and shelter. Even the world’s greatest nations are lacking in providing the food to the common man. According to World Health Organization report, almost 40% people are lacking basic nutrition value, the saddest part is children below 5 years constitute 80% of that. Malnutrition is one serious conundrum where the governments should concentrate more. In the early stages of infantry, more nutritional food should be supplied to the children like the mid-day meal in the schools to overcome the problem.
Secondly, the literacy rate should be improved to an extent where every person should have the basic education to meet the daily needs. A person when educated can make his family educated, there by generations of the family is educated. An illiterate person may not have the idea of how a system or government works. He can question the officials about any problem he faces in the society. Education also avoids superstitions and proper care will be taken by parents in the brought up of their child.
Thirdly, we have an early saying "Health is Wealth". a recent report by a famous newspaper tells that almost 80% of the people are suffering from any of the health issues. Only 20% people of the country are healthy. This is a serious concern which the government should address immediately. Proper health makes the person to live more and study well which then increases the literacy rate and when a person is educated well, he can choose a good career path and there by flourish in the field he likes.
Achievements in the fields of arts and science are also important indicator of the great nation. To achieve those the general well-being of common man inundates the status of great nation. History has given a prominent importance to the past ruler’s achievements, scientists inventions and the artist’s aesthetics and organization. But it misses out how a common man lived in those period and this makes the perception that these are the only means to measure a great nation. However, in the 21st century we have to change the perception and give importance to both achievements and well-being of common man.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2176.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03703703704 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82268864013 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520833333333 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.033198095 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9090909091 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04545454545 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146810828206 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415070970949 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531822501505 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792463796753 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532726436704 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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