The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
While a nation sustains a country for decades, it needs a serious prospect to handle, I believe not only the achievements of its rulers, or scientists also the welfare of the general citizens.
To broadcast the nation, the achievement and the award of the world can promote the nation’s prestige. If the professor wins the award of the Nobel Prize, their country must be famous in coincidence since the news will broadcast the winner’s country and indicate the nation’s benefits. Also, the tourist will enhance their willingness to visit the nation and public the nation’s beauty. Furthermore, the artist who wins the award and is famous in the world might promote their country to elaborate its famous. While the reporter asked about their country the artist can introduce their nations’ beautiful sights and delicious foods, also comfort hotels. Since, the achievement of the famous, the nation’s reputation will be greater. However, the reputation cannot represent a whole nation that the citizen might plague with the plight and worry about the future. Just like in China, although China has a lot of famous people to promote their country, some people, living in China, are always poverty and hungry as usual. If the nation doesn’t care about the citizens’ welfare, the famous represented is not as useful as people think. Even the publics will fight with the government can try to fight with their rights and eager a better life to live. On the other hands, Japan always aware of their people’s welfare and give them huge benefits to their elder to allow them to live comfortably. Also in Denmark, even though people have to pay the high tax, their welfare is the best in the world so the nation will be greater thanks to the good welfare of their citizens. Most important, the government should cultivate some elite can approve them to go abroad to elaborate the nation’s benefits, also enact a law to prove their citizens’ right. Just like the government can through the famous, from the famous person’s broadcast, to add more tourists to enhance tourism and earn more money. So the government can use the money not only to promote their international sights and help more poverty people keep far from poor and approve better welfare to people to make the nation become better.
In conclusion, to let the nation become better, the achievements of its professionals and the welfare of people are all very important. The government needs to complement each other to pursue a more conducive society.
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- Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion which of the following is the best thing to do Interrupt and correct the mistake right away Wait until the class or meeting is over 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The opinions of celebrities such as famous entertainers and athletes are more important to younger people than they are to older people Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 71
- Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities 58
- The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers artists or scientists but by the general welfare of its people 66
- The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers artists or scientists but by the general welfare of its people 50
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2110.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 421.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01187648456 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59407218673 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475059382423 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8005879668 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.222222222 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3888888889 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241695698581 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087718132039 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074068442262 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208887368791 0.150359130593 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321403416857 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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