Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
While it is right to say that technology has a magnanamous effect on our day to day lives, the nature of that effect and weather it actually simplifies our lives is still a moot. In my opinion, the technology does simplify our lives to a great extent, and has in result catalysed the development of human society. Today, our farmers are well aware of the upcoming catastrophies and weather, thanks to the satelites, transmitting us information 24 hours a day; our scientists can spend more time solving actual problems, avoiding tiresome mathematical calculations; and our students can explore the world around them just by a few clicks, all due to help from technology.
In earlier days, the farmer was always worried about the next big tornado or storm that could destroy his hard worked fields. But today, thanks to the satelites on our orbits, transmitting us information 24 hours a day, we know and can inform the farmers of the upcoming hurdles, thus making them well prepared to tackle challenges. The farmer today has better excess to genetically modified crops, making them better suited to challenge the weeds and harmful virues that could previously render their efforts useless. The combined harvesters and other machinery have revolutionised the industry and have made it much easier to preaper volumes of food with minimal efforts. All this technological progress has made life of today's farmer far less stressful and several times more productive.
As a researcher, one has to complete heavy computations to verify his/her analytical and theoretical findings. And while the steps to do these calculations are well defined and laid out, a human still has limited accuracy. Add to it the time and effort which can be saved if this work was outsourced to another object. Computers today have taken this role and excelled in it. a computer, trained in repetative steps can solve problems within seconds which coul earlier have taken sevveral months. This has made the lives of our researchers and scientists much easier.
Today's adults and even childern are well aware of the world around him even from his study room. It's hard to imagine a world where knowledge will flow this freely without technological innovations of the internet. This internet has opened up new dimension of knowldege sharing.
All of these above mentioned points, simply prove that technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, has in fact made it simpler. Never before has humanity grown at such a pace and now is the time to embrace this teechnology for future development of mankind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 143, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Never' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
...our lives, has in fact made it simpler. Never before has humanity grown at such a pac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, apparently, but, if, second, so, still, thus, well, while, as to, in fact, in my opinion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2169.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 427.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07962529274 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74831914473 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578454332553 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7599445299 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.157894737 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4736842105 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15789473684 5.21951772744 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254391760205 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681638820957 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101514828741 0.0758088955206 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135510692186 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118537004677 0.0667264976115 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.