Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
It is undeniable that the unprecedentedly dramastic development of technology over last decades has brought us a tremendous benefits to many aspects of our lives. As every coin has two sides, some are of the opnion that technology also results in negative effects on our lives and make them more complicated than before.
The former view, to a certain extent, can be justified. To my knowledge, those who support such a view can argue that with the aid of technological advancements the tasks, which seemed unviable in the past, have ben made possible. Instead of spending an abundant amount of time in travelling, people nowadays can experience a long-distance journeys with various modes of transportation and in less than no time. What is more, internet, which is considered as a biggest advancement in technology, has made the world available to individual on the palm of their hand.
On the other side, some people fails to to find the opinion plausible enough, and they as well can bring up certain justifications. Above all, it could be strongly debated that people are likely to become a slave of technological gadgets. Specifically, internet and smart phones play an inextricable part of our lives, which prevents us from enjoying social activies and face-to-face communication. In the long run, human being may turn to be indifferent and get away from each other.
All in all, it is obvious that technology development does offer positives and cause negative. My own belief is that the pros usually outweigh the cons and technology still play an increasingly important role in human being's revolution.
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- The best leaders are those who encourage feedback from the people whom they lead.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and sup 30
- Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In dev 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'benefit'?
Suggestion: benefit
...ast decades has brought us a tremendous benefits to many aspects of our lives. As every ...
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Line 2, column 340, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'journey'?
Suggestion: journey
...nowadays can experience a long-distance journeys with various modes of transportation an...
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Line 2, column 459, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... more, internet, which is considered as a biggest advancement in technology, has ...
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Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
.... On the other side, some people fails to to find the opinion plausible enough, and ...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 218, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
...an increasingly important role in human beings revolution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, still, well, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 2235.4752809 60% => OK
No of words: 265.0 442.535393258 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09433962264 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06879469662 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645283018868 0.4932671777 131% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7369366654 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112771429849 0.243740707755 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381287971896 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364601158652 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633318381866 0.150359130593 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359305887136 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.