Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
I don't agree with the given statement to a great extent.
Technology has simplified our lives in many ways. In today world, technology has become ubiquitous and important part of our lives. From this itself we can infer that technology has simplified our lives it's because we being intelligent social animal will never adopt something that is making our lives complicated and difficult. There are so many examples to prove this. Communication has become very convenient and efficient. It is possible to communicate with anyone, anywhere, at any time instantly. Real-time communication like texting, voice call, video call would have never possible without technology. Robots are doing jobs which require great focus, high efficiency and repetition of the same task for a large amount of time and we humans are not good at doing the same thing again and again with high focus and efficiency as our brain need some new simulation every time. Like these, there are so many areas where technology has made our lives very easy like real-time map service, online taxi booking, online food ordering and many more. Also we humans are very curious and getting an answer to questions gives us happiness, technology has also enabled us to study and do research about our nature and this universe. With the help of technology, we have got an answer to many questions about the universe and about our life.
There is some area where technology has failed to make any success like pollution, global warming but I think this will be solved as technology develops even larger.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, i think, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 58.6224719101 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 261.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00383141762 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56472703285 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593869731801 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.698950723 60.3974514979 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.461538462 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211216357887 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787389412273 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875185596234 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845125173786 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100361246923 0.0667264976115 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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