those who make the decision on the basis of their emotion and then justify them tend to be poor decision-maker.
The author of the statement claim that those who make the decision on the basis of their emotion and then justify them tend to be poor decision-maker. While some may argue that this statement holds all the time, others may counter that claim by providing examples. In my essay, I will highlight both sides of the argument, and also provide sound reasoning for my claims.
The decision that human makes in their life will not only affect them but also affect their family members and surrounding people, for example, if a person decides to end his life, then his decision will not only end his life but also make his family members devastated. So we should be very careful while taking any decision.
Some People will make decisions on the basis of other's opinions on that, while others will make the decision on their emotion without thinking much about it, just on the basis of their emotion. But the wise person is the one who take the decision on the basis of his past experience, logical thinking and calculating the pros and cons. For example, if person decides to quit his job as he does not feels that it is not good him or his friends thinks that the job is not perfect for him, then he might have committed a mistake, but before quitting the job if thinks about the pros and cons or think logically, he can take a right decision on whether to quit a job or not. So, we should take the decision wisely.
Moreover, it also seen that people who take decision randomly or on the basis of their emotion, try to justify their decision on the basis of some absurd logic, for example, if take decision to not to attend a family marriage as you don't think they respect and when asked that why you didn't came to the marriage, you gave same absurd reason like not feeling well or because of stomach ache I was not able to attend the marriage.
But it is also true that same time because of the circumstance you have to take decision based on your emotion, for example, if a child of poor person asks or to insist him to buy expensive toy, then he might have taken the decision emotionally or if a sick mom ask his child to stay with her despite some important meeting for work, then also he can take decision on the basis of his emotion.
In sum, we can say that the people should take his decision wisely as his decision will not only affect him but also his family members too and in some cases like mention it is okay to make decisions base on your emotions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 268, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...o take the decision on the basis of his past experience, logical thinking and calculating the p...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 399, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'feel'
Suggestion: feel
... decides to quit his job as he does not feels that it is not good him or his friends ...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 234, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... not to attend a family marriage as you dont think they respect and when asked that ...
^^^^
Line 13, column 286, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...hey respect and when asked that why you didnt came to the marriage, you gave same abs...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 33.0505617978 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 457.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43763676149 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21925209077 2.79657885939 79% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.420131291028 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 646.2 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 23.0359550562 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.149271437 60.3974514979 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.0 118.986275619 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.0833333333 23.4991977007 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401438694082 0.243740707755 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183310446185 0.0831039109588 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.220859611265 0.0758088955206 291% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22554261085 0.150359130593 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867128110449 0.0667264976115 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 14.1392134831 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.83 48.8420337079 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 12.1639044944 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.2143820225 153% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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