Human being is a social animal, we all live in a society where all kind of people do exist. The prompt suggest that regardless of doubts or crtiticism of others express , those who see through their idea will leave a lasting legacy in the system. I strongly agree with the statement made in the prompt.
We all have our own goals and aims to achive something , be it an idea regarding the new invention which one is making a break through or may be a goal to reach a certain level in the career, or helping the people who are in need. The individual idea's and the effort made to achive it, should not be affected by the other people doubts or criticism. when the certain ideas or goals are set by the person they have the vision to make it successful.
In the history we have seen so many scenarios where the society criticized the great mind's for there new ideas and the invention at the beginning.When Alva Adison started his research in find the light bulb he failed so many times and got a lot of criticism from other saying that it of no use when so many tries ended up without any results. But he did not give up, his continuous efforts on his idea and belife,one day gave the result he was expecting and lighten the whole word with his breakthrough innovation. Now we use the light bulbs in our daily life without that we feel there is no life at all.
When scientist discovered that sun is fixed and earth revolves around the sun.some of the religious people started blaming the scientist, they said it is an insane claim, the same this happened when scientist discovered that earth is round like an apple but no one believed at that time and claimed that discovery is madness.They all faced critism for there discovery but they did not quite , there continuous work and the hard work on there idea and belief made such an important discoveries which lead the fundamental to our science.
Today we study all the discoveries and science in our schools and colleges, they are all because of some discovery form some one in the past who believed in there idea and worked hard to achieve it , the criticism from the society does not bother them or stop them in doing so, I strongly believe that those who believe in there idea's and work on it , regardless of the criticism they face from other will leave a lasting legacy
- Those who see their ideas through regardless of doubts or criticism others may express are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy 50
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- The following is a memorandum from the office of Mayor Harrison Smith Jones quot In order to relieve Briggsville s notorious traffic congestion Mayor Harrison Smith Jones plans to build a multi million dollar subway system The subway will run through 60
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...f doubts or crtiticism of others express , those who see through their idea will l...
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Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r own goals and aims to achive something , be it an idea regarding the new inventi...
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Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...something , be it an idea regarding the new invention which one is making a break through or ...
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Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...y the other people doubts or criticism. when the certain ideas or goals are set by t...
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Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: When
...deas and the invention at the beginning.When Alva Adison started his research in fin...
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Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , one
...ontinuous efforts on his idea and belife,one day gave the result he was expecting an...
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Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...fixed and earth revolves around the sun.some of the religious people started blaming the sc...
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Line 7, column 326, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...e and claimed that discovery is madness.They all faced critism for there discovery b...
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Line 7, column 391, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r there discovery but they did not quite , there continuous work and the hard work...
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Line 7, column 482, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'discovery'?
Suggestion: discovery
... idea and belief made such an important discoveries which lead the fundamental to our scien...
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Line 9, column 121, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
... are all because of some discovery form some one in the past who believed in there idea ...
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Line 9, column 198, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...there idea and worked hard to achieve it , the criticism from the society does not...
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Line 9, column 350, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ho believe in there ideas and work on it , regardless of the criticism they face f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, regarding, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 425.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48941176471 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39437324906 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487058823529 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 23.0359550562 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 150.589420457 60.3974514979 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.454545455 118.986275619 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.6363636364 23.4991977007 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26970920489 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111370567072 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170314985481 0.0758088955206 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162991622393 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120108693459 0.0667264976115 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 14.1392134831 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.83 48.8420337079 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.2143820225 153% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.