True beauty is found not in the exceptional but in the commonplace."
Write an essay in which you take a position on the statement above. In developing and supporting your essay, consider instances in which the statement does and does not hold true
As we go about our daily lives, we tend to fall into patterns. It is human nature to stay within a comfort zone. As a result, we become accustomed to our surroundings and can often lose focus on what is actually surrounding us. This has led to the saying that "True beauty is found not in the exceptional but in the commonplace". With this statement, it is important to have a clear understanding of what "beauty" really means. Beauty is cohesive, pleasing, and innocuous. We have become immune to the stimulus of our common surroundings and as a result, we do not always appreciate their true beauty. When we experience something that is exceptional, we are noticing it not because it is necessarily beautiful, but rather that is is different. Ergo, I completely agree with the statement that beauty is, in fact, found in the commonplace.
Every individual is raised in a unique environment and has different experiences throughout their life. As a result, everyone forms their own views and interpretations of the world and their surroundings. Thus, everyone has their own interpretation of what beauty really is - Beauty is relative. Despite this, it is common amongst the majority of individuals that beauty typically indicates something that is pleasing, relaxing, and unobtrusive. This is exactly what surrounds us everyday. We have become comfortable with our surrounds and no longer give it and piece of mind.
On the other hand, when we experience something that is exceptional, it is something that we are not used to. It is something that falls out of our daily observances. Just because it stands out from what we are used to, does not mean that it is beautiful. However, this does not indicate that things that are exceptional are not beautiful. As a matter of fact, many things that are exceptional are also beautiful.
Humans are repetitive in nature and we often become comforatble with our surroundings.
As a result, we lose our appreciation for the beauty that surrounds us everyday. We fall into a state where we only notice things that are different. However, despite these different occurances, which may be beautiful, our common surrounds contain true beauty.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 749, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: is
... necessarily beautiful, but rather that is is different. Ergo, I completely agree wit...
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Line 3, column 407, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...auty typically indicates something that is pleasing, relaxing, and unobtrusive. This is exa...
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Line 3, column 481, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...sive. This is exactly what surrounds us everyday. We have become comfortable with our su...
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Line 5, column 361, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... are not beautiful. As a matter of fact, many things that are exceptional are als...
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Line 8, column 72, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...iation for the beauty that surrounds us everyday. We fall into a state where we only not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, really, so, thus, in fact, as a matter of fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 33.0505617978 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 364.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07692307692 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16867289199 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450549450549 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.0 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 6.24550561798 288% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0188428661 60.3974514979 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.0 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0949248811306 0.243740707755 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032254299903 0.0831039109588 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414002272563 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0503633856756 0.150359130593 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033383939186 0.0667264976115 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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