the statement raises a controversial issue about true success that can be measured primarily in terms of goals one sets for oneself. achieving a goal is very much precious for individual but it does not define true success completely according to my point of view. when people set their goal they have to face so many difficulties and they are trying to succeed. when they succeed at their goal they will demand for another thing. so i want to elaborate my view about true success.
true success is very much subjective.life is full of obstacles, mystery and fortune. there are lots of history of successor who are primarily faces so many failure in their life . we all know failure is a pillar of success. moreover failure make people stronger and more dedicated to achieve their goal. setting a goal for oneself is important but not key to their success.the famous scientist tomas alva edison who fails so many times at his experiment and criticized by surroundings., but he did not give up. so dedication is also a quality for a successor.
after considering all of this, actually there is no such tool to measure true success of anyone's life. it does not only about setting a goal but also a taste of failure and dedication.setting a goal for themselves save time for someone to reach their destination. it needs a good plan to go thorough.
- It is more harmful to compromise one s own beliefs than to adhere to them Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In d 67
- True success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for oneself.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you ta 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, moreover, so, another thing, for another thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 58.6224719101 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 2235.4752809 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 235.0 442.535393258 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74468085106 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84069958226 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591489361702 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 704.065955056 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9383551445 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6428571429 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228439184198 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844091818704 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894956008098 0.0758088955206 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165009276287 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497341511709 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 100.480337079 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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