Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won’t benefit their future careers.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
The students majoring in business or science represent the leaders, scientists and people who are going to shape the world in the coming years. It is important that these students understand the difference between humans and machines is the basic component of humanities which makes its study indispensable.
First, the concept of business or the study of sciences has been formulated by humans since times immemorial for a single purpose. For the advancement and benefit of the human race. The best application of scientific advancements or business is best done if done in a humane way. For example, the corporate office structures of today employ a large number of people working together in big offices. It is not unheard of such environments, the widespread cases of stress, mental breakdowns and the autocratic nature of the management who run these places. When we look deeper into the issue these corporates are run by the same people who one day started at the bottom of the ladder largely dealing in business or science. If the study of humanities was included from the very beginning for the people, it is a push in the right direction to encourage more humane interactions all throughout their careers.
Second, the study of humanities helps people at works and in society to understand people, culture and the world around them and thereby making people more educated about other sections in society and help in ending many of society's problems such as racism, hatred, etc.
While the study of humanities is encouraged, students in the field of business or science today largely underqualified for the jobs for which the companies recruit them. This leads the companies to further spend resources to train the students to make them corporate ready. If during the academic tenure the students were more focused on topics relevant to their field, it may help to make them more industry-ready by the time they graduate.
Therefore on the whole, while a deep humanitarian study may not be required for the students of business and science. It is definitely encouraged for these students to have a set standard of humanities study included in their syllabus to ensure they graduate as competent and humane people of society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a humane way" with adverb for "humane"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ements or business is best done if done in a humane way. For example, the corporate office stru...
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Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...orate office structures of today employ a large number of people working together in big offices....
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...y-ready by the time they graduate. Therefore on the whole, while a deep humanitarian...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 370.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08918918919 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77088193643 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518918918919 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4228596154 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.533333333 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151743868267 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605831680736 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398490354732 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928076523861 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429529702454 0.0667264976115 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.