Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people whom they serve
The government officials represent the people of the state, acting in the best interest of the community at large is their primary goal. The best results are achieved when the voices of all communities are heard and factored in to the decision which positively affects everyone at large.
First, the elected government officials are qualified representatives of all people of the country. These people may represent different ethnicity, communities and minorities. need always looks different in different communities, which is why the government officials need to exercise independent judgment when bringing into effect measures which affect everyone.
Second, the government officials, in addition also represent in the country in the international space. The development and growth of the country in matters of trade, science etc as well as its needs in the future need to be evaluated and executed within the funds allocated to the government officials. This will not be possible if the officials are spending their budget catering to all needs of the people without question.
The people know what their community needs best. independent judgment when combined with the specifics of what the people need, is the best course of action which the officials can implement. Thus the result of independent judgment formulated from the analysis of different community needs, the best course of action.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 177, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Need
... ethnicity, communities and minorities. need always looks different in different com...
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Line 31, column 50, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Independent
...e know what their community needs best. independent judgment when combined with the specifi...
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Line 31, column 193, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...tion which the officials can implement. Thus the result of independent judgment form...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, may, second, so, thus, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 33.0505617978 18% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 218.0 442.535393258 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65596330275 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8803869656 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 215.323595506 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51376146789 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 704.065955056 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5782701728 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.090909091 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 5.21951772744 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170518920231 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079221797555 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508733851716 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10877007081 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138014184931 0.0667264976115 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.1639044944 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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