Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people whom they serve.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
When personal judgement and public's common will is taken in question, the choice of one becomes rather equivocal, perplexing the person in-charge for making such decisions. Though I understand that taking public's interest should be taken in consideration while making rule, or decision, the repercussions of whoic are later faced by the general public, I believe having personal jidgement rather than follwing public bias blindly is necessary for a sucessful government official. Such views are further elaborated in the impending paragraphs.
It is general knowledge that human beings are often amenable to spurious beliefs and sophistry of indivisuals with personal intersest at heard, such that a government official shout not follow the demands of the indivisual, to whom he is appointed to serve with disinterestedness, but shouhd use his own proper judgement while making the decisions. Often times, it can be seen that people with intent of personal gains have spread a mass hysterial, leading a public to demand for projects that in the end, aids these people less than the massive businesses spreading and evoking these issues. The "alleged" rumours spread by Amazon inc. to cut down forest and set up a cardboard manufacturing plan, in order to uplift the dire poverty of Michigan perfectly exemlifies how public can be misled to thinking, and even fighting, such "issues". In such times, a government workers need to take matters into his own hands, than making decisions against his judgement, in the name of placating the public.
Additionally, a country,or state has only a limited amount of annual budget, which is to be spent wisely for the government to run smoothly. Thus a government worker must be vigilant and use his judgement properly in whet concers are to be followed through, and what are to be put aside for future.The tenure of a late B.P. Koirala, a famous Nepali Politicial and president of the 90's, can be taken as a cautionary tales to examplify this issue. A beneficient and kind person at heart, Mr. Koirala used to listend to every public concerns tat knocked through his door, and tried to recrify the issues wiythou any proper personal judgement. In doing so, he spend nearly 80% of the national budget in about half a year into his tenure, spending it on minor issues raised by the public. Then followed was the worse economic catastrope, which Nepal everfaced, making this debacle the talk of the time. This shows how serving the public with open hearts is often not feasible, even logical, so a personal judgement isa necessity in beter mobilizing the resources, else such economic debacle is bound to happen.
Meanwhile, a single person's understanding to an issue is often misleading, so following own's judgements does good in some scenerios, but the perspectives of the general populations must be taken into consideration by a public servent, as sometimes the his or her own judgement may falter in making such decision. So taking public concerns in perspective is nontheless necessary.
Taking everything in retrospect, a successful government officials characterstic is his proper judgement at the time of adversity, which he must utilize in terms of a greater perspective, but he/she in the process of making teh decisions for the public must also consider the public concerns. Then only can better decisions can be made.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...becomes rather equivocal, perplexing the person in-charge for making such decisio...
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Line 1, column 339, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ussions of whoic are later faced by the general public, I believe having personal jidgement ra...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 648, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...ged' rumours spread by Amazon inc. to cut down forest and set up a cardboard ...
^^
Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , or
...g the public. Additionally, a country,or state has only a limited amount of annu...
^^^
Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ely for the government to run smoothly. Thus a government worker must be vigilant an...
^^^^
Line 5, column 299, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...and what are to be put aside for future.The tenure of a late B.P. Koirala, a famous...
^^^
Line 5, column 360, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...B.P. Koirala, a famous Nepali Politicial and president of the 90s, can be taken a...
^^
Line 5, column 417, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'tale'?
Suggestion: tale
...f the 90s, can be taken as a cautionary tales to examplify this issue. A beneficient ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 658, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
...per personal judgement. In doing so, he spend nearly 80% of the national budget in ab...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 249, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'his'?
Suggestion: the; his
...ation by a public servent, as sometimes the his or her own judgement may falter in maki...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2852.0 2235.4752809 128% => OK
No of words: 550.0 442.535393258 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18545454545 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84273464058 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99003524123 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 300.0 215.323595506 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 891.9 704.065955056 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.659052478 60.3974514979 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.444444444 118.986275619 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5555555556 23.4991977007 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27777777778 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.090568146646 0.243740707755 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310434244145 0.0831039109588 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306168502299 0.0758088955206 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0545715473089 0.150359130593 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224003674116 0.0667264976115 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 147.0 100.480337079 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...becomes rather equivocal, perplexing the person in-charge for making such decisio...
^^
Line 1, column 339, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ussions of whoic are later faced by the general public, I believe having personal jidgement ra...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 648, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...ged' rumours spread by Amazon inc. to cut down forest and set up a cardboard ...
^^
Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , or
...g the public. Additionally, a country,or state has only a limited amount of annu...
^^^
Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ely for the government to run smoothly. Thus a government worker must be vigilant an...
^^^^
Line 5, column 299, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...and what are to be put aside for future.The tenure of a late B.P. Koirala, a famous...
^^^
Line 5, column 360, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...B.P. Koirala, a famous Nepali Politicial and president of the 90s, can be taken a...
^^
Line 5, column 417, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'tale'?
Suggestion: tale
...f the 90s, can be taken as a cautionary tales to examplify this issue. A beneficient ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 658, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
...per personal judgement. In doing so, he spend nearly 80% of the national budget in ab...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 249, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'his'?
Suggestion: the; his
...ation by a public servent, as sometimes the his or her own judgement may falter in maki...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2852.0 2235.4752809 128% => OK
No of words: 550.0 442.535393258 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18545454545 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84273464058 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99003524123 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 300.0 215.323595506 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 891.9 704.065955056 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.659052478 60.3974514979 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.444444444 118.986275619 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5555555556 23.4991977007 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27777777778 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.090568146646 0.243740707755 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310434244145 0.0831039109588 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306168502299 0.0758088955206 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0545715473089 0.150359130593 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224003674116 0.0667264976115 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 147.0 100.480337079 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.