Society's characteristics are based on the orthodox values, culture, history, political views, political stability last but not the least the advancement in technology. Major cities hold all of the above mentioned characteristics. I without any doubt agrees with the statement that in order to learn a society deeply one needs to learn about its major cities. As major cities are essence of a country and its culture.
Taking education for example, all the national and international level education systems are embended in the major cities. This shows how a society is involved in education, and how well groomed a society is. Education is the key to success making a statistical data of ratio of educated to non educated shows how much a society is getting advance and also tell that how much it is involved in labor.
Furthermore, almost all historical places, museums, and monoments are located in the major cities. For example, Mughal eras mosques, British eras buildings ;such as, civil servants residence areas all are located in its major city Lahore. The historical building indicates the history of a society, who were the kings here in early eighteenth century, did British lived in Pakistan just as traders or as a ruler. The answers to all the questions are in the historical places in the cities.
Moreover, it is a fact that cities came into being by going through abundant of experiences. Cities are result of hardship of people living there, so how much a society is enthusiastic about growing is illuminated by the advancement of the cities. Another characteristic that follows the above argument is the advancement in technology. Cities are name of technology. How much a country is advance can be determine by its part in technological advancement ;such as, use of electronic systems in everyday life. For example, artificial intelligence assisting in medical, military, and engineering etc..
In addition, the major characteristic is: the political stability. One can also educate himself/herself about the political issues, situation, stability, and views of a society by learning about the cities. A very recent example can be, the general elections 2018 in Pakistan, all the views about democracy can be highlighted in city side only. All the posters can be seen in cities only. Almost all the political leaders are from cities and the Prime Minister that is elected is by the young educated people in cities. So, its the city that illuminate all characteristics of a society.
One might oppose the reasoning by giving the logic that most of the society culture and conventional values are preserved in villages and rural areas rather than in cities. So I am also giving the evidence to support my reasoning; for example, in Pakistan mostly people, for the sake of employment, are migrating to the cities from rural areas. By this point it is proved that cities also contains the traditional values that are brought by the migrants.
In conclusion, cities are the reflection of the society thinking, values, beliefs, and characteristics.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2579.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 500.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.158 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97487814877 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 845.1 704.065955056 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2689296649 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5185185185 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5185185185 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.83258426966 331% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114946692367 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374067084773 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379550220364 0.0758088955206 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0577689622073 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374425714669 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 100.480337079 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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