To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Understanding the built fabric, cultural values, literary development of any settlement is how one understands the characteristics of the society. I agree with the above mentioned statement that the framework of major cities help us understand the important aspects of the society upon which it is built.
As we have observed through out history, cities are of utmost importance in the structure of any settlement. In ancient times cities were the base of any kingdom, housing the kings and queens. The kingdom grew from where they camped thus creating a city, and developement was most seen in the city itself. For instance, in India New Delhi formely known as Delhi was the kingdom for most of the Mughal emperors, the city went through immense development during their reign. The built fabric for example the iconic Mughal dome, jaalis, and Mughal gardens can be seen through out Delhi which characterizes the Mughal Architecture.
Moreover, cities are the base for all the trade work that connects the settlement. All the major commerce happens in the major cities, infact today most of the countries have a city pronounced as the “Financial Capital”. For example, New York is called the financial capital of The United States of America, all the major stock exchange happens in the Wall Street.Thus it is important to study the working of the commerce present in a major city to understand the country as a whole.
However, studying only major cities is the key to understand a society is not absolutly correct either. A lot of times smaller cities have different cultures and values and it is equally important to study these as well to get a better and cohesive understanding of a society. Specially, in terms of religious and cultural view points, smaller cities differ from major cities. Festivals are celebrated in a different way in an urban backdrop as compared to a rural setting.
Thus in conclusion I would like to state that studying cities is an important practice in order to understanding the working of any society but so is in observing the more rural setting. This will give us a broader and a more holistic view of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 363.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9696969697 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79658968603 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498622589532 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1689328691 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.75 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6875 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22360894447 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761222833109 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583264996918 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129458805058 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533051582501 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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