By definition, a society is a combination of various people of common belief, value and systems. these values can range from economic to cultural and value systems.
the prompt argues that one must study the major cities in a society to understand it's most important traits. I hold a neutral position with this prompt for the following reasons.
To Begin with, The major cities in any society is where the main things happens. if you want to know the true character of a person (or idea or anything ) shouldn't one look into its central or main activities. i will say the same for the case of a society. for instance, if one wants to study the yoruba community of western Africa, one would not do justice to it without examining major yoruba cities like Lagos, Ogun and Ondo, Likewise Washington DC, Las vegas for the American because this is where most Americans are and also where most of the governmental and economic activities of the american take place. Hence, the major cities(because this is where most of the activities happen and most population of any society is found) in any society is where one can truly understand the its behavioural traits of its people and in turn the characteristic of the society
However, Due to civilization and urbanization of most major cities of the world, if one is considering societal characteristic (such as cultural and historical details ) may have been lost. one may want to look to study its relatively minor cities where most of these historical details could have been more preserved in a more original form for example more cultural and historic details of societies such as the indians (hindus) will be more observable in its minor cities where it's women and men still dress in the native cultural indian style. Thus,
in conclusion, to understand the most important characteristic of a society one must be all inclusive in study not only its major cites but also its minor cities where cultural details may have preserved better.
- To understand the most important characteristics of a society one must study its major cities 50
- All too often companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiency If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees such consultants would be unnecessary 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, likewise, look, may, so, still, thus, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 339.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85250737463 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68499457772 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466076696165 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 135.237348746 60.3974514979 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.545454545 118.986275619 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8181818182 23.4991977007 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8181818182 5.21951772744 246% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.528800121298 0.243740707755 217% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.212119450963 0.0831039109588 255% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.231446984829 0.0758088955206 305% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.330475605107 0.150359130593 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.181058322406 0.0667264976115 271% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.