Unfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth behind that image
Society plays important role for development of people. It is necessary for society to be clean, knowledgeable, and peaceful. The author claims that society should create an appealing image rather than the reality or truth behind that image. However, it is not true in my point of view, because even if society will create an appealing image instead of the truth behind that image, the progress of people will eventually decrease. No doubt that society's image will become more and more in the future, but what about the people living in that society? Is there no responsibility of society to make people knowledgeable and skilled?
A common people is representative of a society. So it is necessary to keep in mind about the progress of common people in lieu of creating an appealing image. I thing, it will be beneficial for society to create true image of it. Because after doing this, people will know more about the society and importantly know about the true side of the society. It is requirement for people to understand their society very well and recognize their position in the society. If they learn to understand society fully, then it will be easy for them to success in their goals. Because they know about how to stand in the society and how to impact on others in the society.
I don't understand why author claims that it is important to create appealing image. Is there only necessity of society to create an appealing and good image rather than good image? It should be more important for society to focus on the people of that society, to focus on their progress, to focus on their problems, to focus on providing solution for problems. It doesn't necessary for creating fake image to appear good in view of the other society.
The writer would probably is of view that it is necessary for society to create good image in competition to the other society. But if people of the society are not happy, then what the society will gain after creating appealing and good image? Is it more important for society to create an good image rather than to see a progress of the people who live in that society? I think author should focus on this consideration. So I am not agree with the author's claim.
In the end, I would like to sum up by saying that it should be primary goals for the society to focus on the problems of the people rather than creating a good image. It is more important for the society, because if people will not get proper solution from their corresponding society, then people will not happy in living in that society. People will not comfortable to live there and will not willing to create an innovative progress. So it will impact to the whole society and also impact to the whole country. So, in my point of view I would like to say again and again that it should be more and more important for the society to create true and real image rather than appealing image.
- People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole 50
- Unfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth behind that image 50
- "We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whoseviews contradict our own."; disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning." 16
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'i think', 'no doubt', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.195381882771 0.240241500013 81% => OK
Verbs: 0.140319715808 0.157235817809 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.088809946714 0.0880659088768 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0674955595027 0.0497285424764 136% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0586145648313 0.0444667217837 132% => OK
Prepositions: 0.156305506217 0.12292977631 127% => OK
Participles: 0.0195381882771 0.0406280797675 48% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.48538482825 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0497335701599 0.030933414821 161% => OK
Particles: 0.00177619893428 0.0016655270985 107% => OK
Determiners: 0.0870337477798 0.0997080785238 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0355239786856 0.0249443105267 142% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0106571936057 0.0148568991511 72% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2985.0 2732.02544248 109% => OK
No of words: 519.0 452.878318584 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75144508671 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7730044521 4.58838876751 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.327552986513 0.366273622748 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.196531791908 0.280924506359 70% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.136801541426 0.200843997647 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0828516377649 0.132149295362 63% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48538482825 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 219.290929204 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.319845857418 0.48968727796 65% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 37.3274864922 55.4138127331 67% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6194690265 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.2222222222 23.380412469 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2520440529 59.4972553346 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.555555556 141.124799967 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 23.380412469 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.37037037037 0.674092028746 55% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.21349557522 230% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 38.875401413 51.4728631049 76% => OK
Elegance: 1.39333333333 1.64882698954 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356116991154 0.391690518653 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.162314046666 0.123202303941 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.111440038758 0.077325440228 144% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.527133432195 0.547984918172 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.146281213846 0.149214159877 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156785713882 0.161403998019 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117162456986 0.0892212321368 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.61982759372 0.385218514788 161% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0717597565007 0.0692045440612 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290364376353 0.275328986314 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080513721095 0.0653680567796 123% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.4325221239 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 17.0 7.22455752212 235% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 23.0 13.5995575221 169% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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