Unfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth behind that image.
The argument claims that creation of an appealing image in the contemporary society is highly substantial in comparison to the reality or the truth behind that image. Stated in the ways there has to be relevant evidences to which one can imply this statement .Various causes and resources are required to weigh the choice to having an appealing image.
Firstly it’s the attitude of human nature to be in good eye and good books of one surroundings. Not to accentuate the fact that inclusion of manifold qualities helps to establish an image.The one which can be easily persuasive and highly impactful.These include being astute, humanitarian ,being honorable, doing all the good deeds and equvalizing the social and personal life in a proficient way in addition to that always being very prudent in a way to keep up ones furnished image as always Projected . It’s definitely like a conjuring act and it comes with great responsibilities.To be ascertain of what an individual is choosing or deciding to be ,every action has to be supervised and then projected or it may harm ones image.
Secondly,as we can recall to the public eye as well a nominal person there are varied amount of personalities which have this appealing image traits. The Actors,politicians,telenovela stars,the high profiles ranked officers ,teachers, Prinicpals ,Chairmens of the society ,Priests ,Holy foundations founders ,Doctors ,Engineers and Multinational companies Ceo and so on. Their role in the contemplative society is the most crucial and what underlies this image is a dark twisted story which no one is aware of as well as no one literally cares about it.We give them immense power and help them built this image by following them on social media platforms like instagram ,snap chat ,facebook ,etc where we get a glance of their appealing lifes styles and image which makes us envy them ,thereby following them closely to imitate them in our best ways.On what they eat, their exercise regime, their diurnal activities too.Through this image it is very easy to pass on Persuading messages and reminders in tire situations,because everyone follows them and gets easily affected when they are involved.The most leading example to the argument was during the Corona virus outbreak Bollywood celebrities like Mr Amitabh Bachan,Kartik Aayan ,social media influencers , the political parties supremes,etc came out to together and pled the people of nation to stay at home in lock down emergency and follow the protocols laid down by the government, which was easily conveyed to the public by them due to their appealing image and that also how ,just by showcasing their lives on internet of what they were actually doing that home and how they were dealing with the lockdown with constant uploads and what they were doing in the spare time all the way from colouring,making tik-tok videos ,working out,singing songs ,dancing ,learning make up hacks,cooking ,cleaning and so on.
This really created an impact on the youth as well as the commoners to follow too as even these high appalling people were also following it ,which helped in a positive way irrespective of what history or truth lies behind it .Just as this maxim -you see it you believe it,that’s all.
Finally ,to conclude it there is grave importance given to the superficiality of an image than to depth of it and reality behind it. It’s a personal choice and one”s ways to look at it.Some might easily fall prey to what is showcased and some may go into the depth of it.In summary the argument weighs on personal acceptance ,so the argument might be flawed and uncanny.
- Question Authority Only by questioning accepted wisdom e can advance our understanding 66
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is better to work as a team than as an individual to succeed Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, first, firstly, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, in addition, in summary, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.6327345309 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 11.1786427146 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 13.6137724551 118% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 28.8173652695 201% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 90.0 55.5748502994 162% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3042.0 2260.96107784 135% => OK
No of words: 600.0 441.139720559 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94923200384 4.56307096286 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0165362878 2.78398813304 108% => OK
Unique words: 322.0 204.123752495 158% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536666666667 0.468620217663 115% => OK
syllable_count: 959.4 705.55239521 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.96107784431 181% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 22.8473053892 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 378.921021449 57.8364921388 655% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 276.545454545 119.503703932 231% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.5454545455 23.324526521 234% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.7272727273 5.70786347227 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 59.0 5.25449101796 1123% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199772859352 0.218282227539 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101662929448 0.0743258471296 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1238852464 0.0701772020484 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127329093343 0.128457276422 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804043704666 0.0628817314937 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.7 14.3799401198 207% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.67 48.3550499002 34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 12.197005988 200% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.5979740519 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.71 8.32208582834 129% => OK
difficult_words: 167.0 98.500998004 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.6 11.1389221557 212% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 11.9071856287 202% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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