Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Universities are the places where people get in to become master of their subject, and if they are taught variety of subjects then they might be jack of all and master of none. So, I disagree with the statement that students should study variety of courses outside of their own field.
Learning is a life long process. Man learns, from his cot to the grave. There is no age limit for learning, however, learning capacity gets reduced with age but it remains continue. It is an established fact that toddlers till the age of 5 have hundred percent learning capacity, which starts decreasing after that. In tender age students can learn variety of subjects but in university they need to be specific.
In school, students are taught almost every subject from mathematics to history. It is the time, when they get familiar with all fields and find some subjects interesting and some subjects banal. In colleges they get relatively concise and are taught basics of major subjects. And, in university students get entered in their favorite field of study. Universities, being large body are fully equipped with highly qualified teachers and advances techniques to make the student master of his work.
On the other hand, if students are taught variety of courses in addition to the student's field of study then, they can be overloaded. It might lead to deviation from their own field. Hence, the students may be jack of all and master of none. Moreover, as schools and colleges use to teach basics of all subject, repetition of those subject can be wastages of resources, time and money. However, courses outside the student's field of study those are allied and bolstering, should no doubt be included in university curriculum. For example, statistics is an important subject that might not be taught in school and college but should be included in university course line. Because, every research need to be analyzed statistically, and if it is not included along with the student's subject of study, his research might has no value.
However, in some cases, people do not get job in the field they have studied. In this case, the variety of subjects they learned in school and college help them to perform their job. So, it can assume that students should have knowledge of all subjects in addition to their own field.
Similarly some subjects for the grooming of student’s personality and making him ready for practical life should be the part of university curriculum. So, it can be concluded that university should include field subjects along with some allied subjects to make the students fully equipped and ready for practical life ahead.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... with age but it remains continue It is an established fact that toddlers till the age of 5 have hu...
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Suggestion: a hundred
...ct that toddlers till the age of 5 have hundred percent learning capacity which starts ...
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Suggestion:
...t in university they need to be specific In school students are taught almost eve...
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...s to make the student master of his work On the other hand if students are taught...
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...f none Moreover as schools and colleges use to teach basics of all subject repetiti...
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Suggestion:
...of study his research might has no value However in some cases people do not get ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, then, for example, in addition, no doubt, of course, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2145.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 445.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8202247191 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46494421972 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.411235955056 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.0 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.2370786517 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 445.0 23.0359550562 1932% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 60.3974514979 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2145.0 118.986275619 1803% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 445.0 23.4991977007 1894% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 140.0 5.21951772744 2682% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249754427904 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.249754427904 0.0831039109588 301% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147761339288 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591024688948 0.0667264976115 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 223.8 14.1392134831 1583% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -371.74 48.8420337079 -761% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 175.7 12.1743820225 1443% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.16 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 28.26 8.38706741573 337% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 11.8971910112 462% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 180.0 11.2143820225 1605% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 55.0 11.7820224719 467% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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